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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the only flaw i could see was in the first chapter... but now i forget where it is... anyway if you ever need a beta (like if you wanna get rid of your current one) i am available and would make myself available however you want (like through msn orwatever messenger you use or through email). the only thing is i usually get on the computer somewhere between 6 and 10 and are on til anywhere between 1 and 3. so yeah... if you want a beta i volunteer... i read a lot and being a beta is just fun for me
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*combination jawdrop and nosebleed action* The first chapter was nice but the second is just wow.
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now you should either include shizune some how or maybe have a face off for the title.
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking HOT! That's all there is to say really, I mean damn! Good work!
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love naru/tsu stories, I wish more people would write them. Anyway I think you did a good job keeping them in character, which id say is hard to do in a story like this. Look forward to more.
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME.
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhh!!! You continued it!! hehehe ^^
Another excellent chapter. I loved Tsunande's restraint of Naruto and Sakura's horror and shock at finding out what she had to do. >:) Jiraiya's manipulation was once again, also brilliant.
This story is so awesome. I love it! Keep up the good work.
Another excellent chapter. I loved Tsunande's restraint of Naruto and Sakura's horror and shock at finding out what she had to do. >:) Jiraiya's manipulation was once again, also brilliant.
This story is so awesome. I love it! Keep up the good work.
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August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update i give it ten out of ten! cant wait for the next update, and good work on keepin sakura in character, hope you update soon,
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i say that you should continue this piece. it was really well written and descriptive also while maintaining the characters personalities. great work! hope to see you continue this story,
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow lol... so did she teach sakura lol