rate_review Reviews

The characters are in character and the plot is believable. It's a little rough around the edges in terms of flow (there are a few cases of repeated words and redundant ideas) and the smut is a tiny bit cleche but these are easily curred by experience and a good beta (editor). I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Hope naruto is still the main man, when tsunade and sakura and shizune want their fill. update soon

I enjoyed this. although you narration and character development could use just a spot of polish, it was a well executed, compitent fanfic. I am personally a huge fan of Tsunade/Naruto I would enjoy seeing this one-shot pairing continued into a multi chapter fic, becaue I think this has potential for far more than one chapter, and the way you have set it up so far, It would kind of funny to have those two ending up together ultimately because of jiraiyas perverted medling.

I thought this story or fic was really good I just hope that your planning to go on with it I would love to see it Naruto and Shizune go at it and I mean go all the way and then ith Temari but that is just me ayways keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON