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for A regular trickster!

by ShizukaKawa

person Anon
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice....not bad at all totally worth the 24 hour(i think ...more or less i'm dumb i dont know) wait...cant wait for 6
person hisoka
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ilike their reaction to his clean uniform and sasuke rihgt behind him.sasuke lied he did look.
luck keep it up!!!
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh lala go naruto....go sasuke... yeah naruto suck the uchiha's finger...that was so cute yet naughty..i like it alot cant wait for the next
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg that is so hott. yeah i said it, wow. i am really enoying this story, poor abused naruto! keep writing,please please please!
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you n8uts? how could you have the heart to delite such a grait story??? O.O enyway. pleas update soon! ^^
person hisoka
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
glad you continued this is soo good,work on word!!!
person despairs
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol that was so cute to see Naruto so flustered over being 'hard'
I'm happy that he's keeping Sasuke as a tutor and that Shika and Shino were friendly. :D
Once again i say, Great work! Please keep going.
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool can't wait for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...aww it seems like sasuke is really sorry...i hope naruto takes the words sasuke said to heart...
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its a really good story and I can't wait for you to write some more.