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So far I likey, and yes I think you should finish it. I would like to see how this story goes. I love lemons, more lemons the better. I likem juicey(sp?).
Lots of positions is nice.
NO TOYS they dont need em.
Fetishes...no
Oral? some is nice.
Fingering nah.
Some rough sex is good, but not Kyuubi induced. All natural.

But other than that I trust your artistic creativity(sp?)(and yes i cant spell sometimes o__O )

Toys and whips definitely. Update soon

Hi- I think your story is awsome! My answer to whn we want an update would be as soon as possible, but as long as it takes you to write.
As for positions etc..... I think for the first time, Naruto needs to top to show Sasuke how much he cares for him, but then they can switch, and I think Sasuke should tease the shit out of Naruto by however you deem necessary. I'm not much into pain, and I think the guy's relationship is too important for Kyuubi to take over. There you have it... That's my advice. Can't wait to see what you'll do!
Slave

well how about most of it. i'd like to think that when naru confronts sasuke about it and have this great sex that makes sasu not able to walk for weeks. you know. so first gentle. as though promising that there's going to be more of this. acknowledging that this exist, and then to the rough sex where he ties sasuke up. (no kyuubi/naru/sasu thoug) it'd be just naruto and sasuke. the kyuu(naru)/sasu can be a sequel if you could.
and could u update it on tuesday?
thanks for updating
jiji

Oh wow that's a lot of choices.

Hmm....let's see. Oral is good and I'd love to see a rim job. Sure tie Sasuke up...why not? Or Naruto for that matter but I think I agree with slave that the first time Naruto should be the one doing the plowing.
It fits this fic a bit better.

Toys...Toys are a good thing XD

Hmm..rough sex, I don't mind a little but normally I'm not into the whole pain thing, but there have been some exceptions. I usually like thresholds though. Such as it's teetering on the threshold of being painful but it's not.

I like it when the boys masterbate while getting banged (*drools*).

As far a positions I'm way too preverted to really care but I do prefer for first times not to be doggy style...there's something about them not being able to look into each others eyes but if you throw in a mirror that minor detail is taken care of.

Honey I would love a super fast update but as a fellow writer I also understand the importance of taking time with writing lemons so as far as that part goes..whenever you can get the next chapter done I'll be reading it.

*humps and madly molests*

cai

please update soon!!

Gahhh...I want to read about Naruto fucking Sasuke's mouth along with other things. Sasuke is a kinky little bastard isn't he.

I don't have any damn bones but can I offer to hump and molest you instead?? I very good at it, I promise.

Your such a tease with the short lemon but it was well worth the read. I look forward to reading more.

cai

1. Absolutely.
2. I want Sasuke to be very much an Uke, riding naruto, vocal, some rimming, use a ring on sasUke, definitely not gentle (I hate those), and no condoms.
3. Whenever possible.

realy good job, i cant wait till the next chapter!

ok ok fine.

just post the next chap O_o
this is a review. yeah~

uh and, O_Ov sasUKE's... virgin... is a sight to be behold~ O_Ov *eating popcorn*