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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is the first time i'm reading this story...i gotta say it totally made my night. This story has the type of dark theme that i can like because of it's depth. While this type of genre has been done before, you've taken it and made it your own. The plot and the characters you've managed to write in such a very careful and extremely detailed way that it leaves practically no room for misunderstanding imo. Everything has a meaning and even the sex scenes aren't some meaningless thing done without thought. I like how i can understand the thought process and how the seriousness of the circumstances also somehow blend in with the sexiness. It's also managed to emotionally suck me in, which very few fics do. Sasuke's devil may care attitude is attractive in itself despite everything that's been done to him, or rather BECAUSE of everything that has, and it's a starkly intriguing combination next to Naruto's unique brand of gentleness and naivety. Those two together, how you've written them, are amazing.
I think this is the best SasuNaru fic i've read of this genre and i thank you for writing it with alot of thought. I can't express how excited i am to read more of it in the future as i'm already rooting for Sasuke and Naruto. I hope they can look out for each other and Sasuke can maybe learn to let Naruto look out for him too in the future. I truly can't wait for the next update. Congrats on this fic! =)
I think this is the best SasuNaru fic i've read of this genre and i thank you for writing it with alot of thought. I can't express how excited i am to read more of it in the future as i'm already rooting for Sasuke and Naruto. I hope they can look out for each other and Sasuke can maybe learn to let Naruto look out for him too in the future. I truly can't wait for the next update. Congrats on this fic! =)
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Thank you for the update. I can't wait to see whats next. I hope Sasuke dosen't do it. Please update again asap.
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yey there was an update! I re read the entire story just to make sure I didnt miss anything! Update soon?
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy I could cry!
I thought this story was done for! I'm so glad you updated and I'm even more excited about the wonderful chapter you wrote!
Reading it made me feel as if you never stopped! I hope you get enough reviews to keep going, I know it would be a dark day if I never got to see the end of this great story!
Wonderful work!!!
Simply Breath-taking!
So looking forward to the next chapter!
I thought this story was done for! I'm so glad you updated and I'm even more excited about the wonderful chapter you wrote!
Reading it made me feel as if you never stopped! I hope you get enough reviews to keep going, I know it would be a dark day if I never got to see the end of this great story!
Wonderful work!!!
Simply Breath-taking!
So looking forward to the next chapter!
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty nice story... Good work, i can't wait to see more... please update :D
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til the next chapter and no way was this chapter too long. When you do add to this, Dysfunction, and The Color of Blood , do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the
email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How soon is soon, because this story is too good. I can't hardly wait for the next chapter.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The first chapter at the start really caught my attention because of how well written the intro was. What better more, the kinky smut between Sasuke and Naruto was very hot!! I hope you update soon! I’m intrigued to see how Sasuke escapes the clutches of his brother Itachi and also if they two (Sasuke and Naruto) will be able to live happily in the end away from everyone. Keep up the excellent work!! ^_^
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story sooo much! Pleeaassee write more!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HIS REVENGE FOR HIS LOVER IS GREAT, HE PROBLY KILL SOMEONE FOR HIM EVEN IF HE SAY ITS ALL FOR A GOOD LAY. HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON