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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was such a great story!! i loved it please post the next chapter soon. :)
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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... awesome story... in a messed up, hot ramen, never, EVER touch the handles in a motel bathroom kinda way! ;)
I love the relationship that you are building between Naruto and Sasuke. I'm glad they just laughed and snuggled in the morning, I thought they both could use that more, although they are so freakin' hot together, but I digress. (blush)
Until the next.
I love the relationship that you are building between Naruto and Sasuke. I'm glad they just laughed and snuggled in the morning, I thought they both could use that more, although they are so freakin' hot together, but I digress. (blush)
Until the next.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has to be one of my favorites. Please post new chappy soon. No I don't think the chapter was to long.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I want to tell you that this is one of the greatest stories I've read, and I've read a lot!
You're really GREAT!
That's all I can say for now.
And keep up the good work!!!!!
You're really GREAT!
That's all I can say for now.
And keep up the good work!!!!!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thumbs up for your creativeness.. you are so cut out as a writer... after reading chapt 3 & 4 it really had me thinkin like 'wow'.. no words really... it really got me thinkin about some people who arent as lucky, going though such torment while the rest of us complains at the slightest problem we face...
Now that we know more about Sasuke, is there more to our favorite blond than what we knew earlier? The poor boy doesnt have and form of grudge in his blood against anyone... such an angel... More please~~~ ^-^
Now that we know more about Sasuke, is there more to our favorite blond than what we knew earlier? The poor boy doesnt have and form of grudge in his blood against anyone... such an angel... More please~~~ ^-^
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue soon!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow just Wow. I read Psycho damn this was good and scary. I also watched film - so I could imagine this hotel pretty well.
Mizuki? Damn I'm in shock. In a good way. Really Iruka as a bad boy is unreal to me - but still he may be his teacher - but I think this will be Kakashi(I hope no...) don't it? Or Ebisu.
Uh I had to skip Sasuke/Itachi part ... It was just to much for me bc I like Itachi(in manga and as a character) and I like Uchihacest but more in a platonic/brothery love way and yeah... Itachi in this is fucking son of a bitch and I have no words to describe it damn it... poor Sasuke... I don't know what to say!
This is the best psycho fick on my list - you win with Breaking Apart by cloudydayz - you may be proud.
As always sorry for bad gramar etc but my hands are shaking when I'm writing it really. It was great chapter:)
Mizuki? Damn I'm in shock. In a good way. Really Iruka as a bad boy is unreal to me - but still he may be his teacher - but I think this will be Kakashi(I hope no...) don't it? Or Ebisu.
Uh I had to skip Sasuke/Itachi part ... It was just to much for me bc I like Itachi(in manga and as a character) and I like Uchihacest but more in a platonic/brothery love way and yeah... Itachi in this is fucking son of a bitch and I have no words to describe it damn it... poor Sasuke... I don't know what to say!
This is the best psycho fick on my list - you win with Breaking Apart by cloudydayz - you may be proud.
As always sorry for bad gramar etc but my hands are shaking when I'm writing it really. It was great chapter:)
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better. I really can't wait to read more!!!
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness you have me HOOKED! the sex scenes are so friggin hawt! keep em coming. i love the portrayal of a cute innocent naruto. and sasuke, made me laugh a lot at his "badass" ways. he seems to have a prankster side of him i would have affiliated to naruto and a recklessness that again, i would have affiliated to naruto. but i kinda like this naughty sasuke. he's fun. and dude, wanna bitch slap ten-ten so bad! which is weird cuz tenten is a pretty neutral character in my opinion. would never have suspected her to be mean and condescending like that. ino would have been perfect, but maybe too cliche. i love long chapters. i'll definitely check regularly to see your next update. hopefully its soon.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, this story is breath-taking! Like no...really its super addicting! I'm was hanging on the edge of my sit and everything. Damn right Sasuke had every right to fuck up that bitche's car! -growl- whore...but I love the little note he left Naruto's step-father. man...your story is like poptarts...crazy good!! I can't wait for the next chapter, and wondeful lemons by the way!