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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have once again put out a wonderfull chapter. GAH! This one got me so pumped! Im ssoo excited for the next chapter, the plot is getting really interesting. I also LOVED the ramen symbolism, quite amazing.
I feel so bad for Sasuke. Nothing seems to be going for him, besides Naruto lol. Much angst in his life. Especially with Mizuki after him now. XD
Keep up the great work and please update whenever you are able. <3
I feel so bad for Sasuke. Nothing seems to be going for him, besides Naruto lol. Much angst in his life. Especially with Mizuki after him now. XD
Keep up the great work and please update whenever you are able. <3
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wanna see sasuke bite someones head off(ya no yell and crap)someone he doesnt know but naruto knows the possessive thing is great, it goes along with the fact that hes an insasiable bastard who doesnt give a shit about anything people think or say.i dont think it was too long like the length.
hope you can update soon so much more action, angst, etc.
hope you can update soon so much more action, angst, etc.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, That was definately not too long. I love your long chapters. I love the way you write. The way you can feel what they are feeling. You're a great writer. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter and I can't wait to see more sasuke and naruto in the next!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOSH! *huggles!* *Glomp!* I loved chapter 4! I'm all giggly! You finally updated!!!! Oh yes...Naruto Riding Sasuke...EEEK! I luff that! *squeals in delight!!* Email me, and tell me how the picture is going!! ^^
luff you!
luff you!
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We want chapter 4! We want chapter 4! We want chapter 4! hehe! how is it going?
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I love this fic. The blowjob by the car was absolutely amazingly erotic, if that phrase even exists. Have a new chapter out soon. Now I must check to see if you've emailed back.
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
they seem to solve their problems in a carnial fassion, funny.i thought sasuke would do something about tenten and i never thought she could be suck a bitch.red handcuffs...nice,gotta remember to use that maybe write it on a tshirt er something.
please update this is one of my fav stories and not because its long(but that is a plus)
please update this is one of my fav stories and not because its long(but that is a plus)
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh goshers. you're a genius. i love your style and i love love love the sex and i love love love love you.:D i'm inlove with this story and i hope that you update soon so i can feel all giddy yaaay. and i want a boy, please ;)
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holly shit! This was awesome... I don't know what to say, but you are on my fave list if it goes to lemons. Not just because they are hot (they are belive me! ;p) but cuz you write it with such emotions, damn even when they only kissed it was so good... other people should read your stuff and learn from you!
Your Sasuke has personality, he has character... there was so many 'sasu-emo' but your is the best. Naruto is also in some way more orginal than in other ff for me. I love your story, really I will read everything you give us!
Your Sasuke has personality, he has character... there was so many 'sasu-emo' but your is the best. Naruto is also in some way more orginal than in other ff for me. I love your story, really I will read everything you give us!