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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe, Sasuke, you player.
Seriously, though, that was a hot chapter, and I look forward to the next. Just don't keep me waiting long.
Seriously, though, that was a hot chapter, and I look forward to the next. Just don't keep me waiting long.
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Despite the dark theme, I love this story. Sasuke is so expressive here and said what he thought of Naruto in so many wonderful ways. I love this part:
"you can't taint your kind of beauty you know Naruto?" (or something like that)
“I could spend all day fucking your ass into the ground and you’d still be as pure as the day you were born.”
"So goddamn fucking beautiful" (this one went straight to my heart, gosh i melt on Naruto's behalf)
and yay they changed their minds! i hope Naruto can escape his step father~ but since they are going to Oto.. what about Itachi? I am so curious and excited now.. I hope you can update soon! Gambate!
"you can't taint your kind of beauty you know Naruto?" (or something like that)
“I could spend all day fucking your ass into the ground and you’d still be as pure as the day you were born.”
"So goddamn fucking beautiful" (this one went straight to my heart, gosh i melt on Naruto's behalf)
and yay they changed their minds! i hope Naruto can escape his step father~ but since they are going to Oto.. what about Itachi? I am so curious and excited now.. I hope you can update soon! Gambate!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue now!!!!! this story...its very deep! plz continue this and your other fics and i'll love you sooooooo muuuuuuuuuccccccchhhhhhh lol
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes,continue! his life is sad but your a very good writer i wonder how he sees a bright day inside of a room, i thought it would be all bright white light and you walk in then poof your gone ya no. but you make it more interesring go on go on
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, This is 'envious'
I couldn't have imagined a better ending.
Love how you described sasuke near the beginning xD Twas smexy. I love the angsty stories, and for once no one died, YEY. Not that killing people off ISN'T bad, you know? Hokay, so now i'm getting off topic. Like i said, This story is definetly one of my fav, and i'm a picky lil betch sometimes when it comes to angty fanfics. I love your way of describing things and people, it's not too little or too much and creates a perfect vision of what's going one.
I luff you nows. *bows down* i worship thee and your awesome writting skillorz.
I really hope to see more of your work soon.
Good luck and keep up the great work.
I couldn't have imagined a better ending.
Love how you described sasuke near the beginning xD Twas smexy. I love the angsty stories, and for once no one died, YEY. Not that killing people off ISN'T bad, you know? Hokay, so now i'm getting off topic. Like i said, This story is definetly one of my fav, and i'm a picky lil betch sometimes when it comes to angty fanfics. I love your way of describing things and people, it's not too little or too much and creates a perfect vision of what's going one.
I luff you nows. *bows down* i worship thee and your awesome writting skillorz.
I really hope to see more of your work soon.
Good luck and keep up the great work.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so awesome!!
sasuke is my hero...naruto's too.
i wonder how big brother is going to respond once sasuke has naruto around?
sasuke is my hero...naruto's too.
i wonder how big brother is going to respond once sasuke has naruto around?
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was soooo good...more please.
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes yes!!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Of course you have to continue. You can't leave our favorite blond like this!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES I THINK U SHOULD CONTINUE!!!! I WANNA KNO WHO WAS THERE!!! SOOOOOOOOO PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE!!!