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for Oh, How the Mighty Fall

by VRon8899

person Word_Slave
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, so read the second chapter. Umm, how do I say this... Wow! I think you could certainly add a few chapters to this one! Finish the night up, the next couple of days, and I really want to know if he returns to Konoha and what happens. Please?
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person Angevin
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, thank you for writing it!!
person Rin
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You are so so one of my favorite people right now. I would not have believed that someone could pull off a threesome with Gaara and Kankuro in the mix while remaining in character. You rule. Any chance of pairing Naruto with Shikamaru sometime? Please please!
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just had to read this again (giggling madly the entire time =^^=) and I have to say, its just about one of the hottest things I've ever read.

hehehehe. We need to collaborate more often. I wish I was a writer, but I'm so not. I am an illustrator though, so if you ever want me to return the favor, feel free to email me and I'll draw you some custom made Naru-smut. ^^ hehe

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see some of you other commissions too! <3
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot.
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i f-ing love you! i've been waiting forever to read a sand brothers & naru pwp! fricking awesome! i look foward to the next.
person Ukagau
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooohhh. = > Very nice story even if the pairing is original! Thumbs up on it though. My favorite part would be when Gaara tells Naruto that if Kanku had touched him (which he did), Gaara would have to kill kanku. Oh boy, did I love that. Made me feel all ooey gooey inside. =D I know you don't know if the ending is good or not, but I like it a lot! I don't know if it could happen any other way with the way the story is. great job as usual. Don't fret, writing hard peices just as experience under your belt! -gives some ramue and rice candy-
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I love you. =^^=

It was everything I'd hoped for and more. hehehe.
person Ukagau
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Some smexy thoughts to pnder over at work! Maybe not hte best thing to read before hand, but it will keep me...happy XD Very hot, very nice! Can't wait for the next one!!!! (Don't work to hard!)
person Kellie
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its so great to find a fic like this. I enjoyed reading it very much. For some reason, while reading this, I pictured Sasuke & Naruto doing "pony play" with Sasuke refering Naruto as his golden stallion ^^. And I really look forward to the next chapter =^__^=