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for Sacrifice

by Sandlewood996

schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far your story is holding my interest. I so love ItaNaru pairings and look forward to reading you're next chapter.
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for itachi to get there. man, wont naru be surprised to see him. ^_^
person Envi
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:3

I like this story a whole bunches... then again, this is probably the first story i have ever read with Naru-chan losing his mind... which is awesome and i'm totally for it. Cause people losing thier sanity mixed with torture and rape just grasps my interest more.

Don't as why.

Enbi is just wierd like that.

But keep up the good work! I do have to say that the lasted chapter isn't as bad as you think it is.

Good luck!!!!!
person Rosebud
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I actually liked this chapter a lot. It was really good. Poor Naruto. I hope that he gets free soon! Keep it up! ^^
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. so has he been thinking of a way to escape the whole time or was that a bluff? either way, it damn near had me fooled. looking foward to your next update.
person ginger
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am still in the first chapter, and I have to say I enjoy your writing a lot - it's complex and layered and you have good characterizations, not to mention that the whole "Let me in!" "No, you let me out" dialogue was so amusing (yes, I know that Naruto is hurt and he wants a safe place, but I couldn't help but imagine Kyuubi's exasperation at the Kit trying to get in there with him instead of letting him out).

There's just one minor thing I don't agree with - the notion that Kisame is a stupid brute. He's an alite nin, and he's survived long enough to see 30 birthdays. If he were stupid, he'd be long-dead, brute force or no. Just my opinion.
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally I made it to review again!
I like this story very much... The problem is, sooo many thinks are so unclear at the moment!
I really hope, it becomes clearer with the passing chapters!
Keep up your good work! *grin*
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have the same problem with the A and the W and sometimes the S key. but only sometimes. i havet to hit it a little harder than normal for it to work but it does. Keep up the great work and update soon ne? ja!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like goro. lol. he reminds me of some of the elerly people i see at work. looking foward to your next update.
person Rosebud
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! ^^
Hope you can update soon!