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for Torture

by KatherynnRae

schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty flipping awesome story. I hardly noticed your lack of a spell checker because there were not that many mispelled words, if any. Your use of imagery is jsut great. You paint a picture with words and I can see it clearly in my mind. I am looking forward to your next chapter. Have a great day.
person Kaysan
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so addictive! I mean, it is a little rough to read considering the subject matter at times, but you need that to really appreciate the story. I just can't wait to see what plays out next. They better catch and torture the living crap outta Kabuto. And then Sakura and Kakashi can get married and live happily ever after! *blush*

Sorry, sorry. Your story I know. And you're doing such a wicked great job so hope to see more soon! Hugs & Kisses!
person Kaysan
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this is interesting! I love a good KakaSaku and they're even better with a mission thrown in somewhere. Can't wait to see what happens next! Hugs & Kisses!