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for Playing with the Toys

by Mako75

schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Some how I missed a bunch of chapter, so I just got caught up now, but that was like...Wow! I loved how Naruto and Sasuke's relationship evolved. I can't wait to find out what happens now the Naruto is scarred.
Can't wait for more.
Wow!
=)
person Imagy
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwww, this is so sad
and sweet in a way
an unusual way
but one none the less

I can't wait to see what happens when Naruto wakes up~!
:D
person Imagy
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PS
oh, and if you'd like I can make another cover art for this story, babe
um, to see some of my stuff you can lookit here: http://queen-trickster.deviantart.com/art/original-KH-I-II-character-46645163
and the rest of my gallery, but it's a really bad exampple of my stuff
oh, and yes, I'd love to be on your mailing list
my e-mail's fuzzy800@bellsouth.net
~love yah ;D
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was full of blood, jealousy, threat of seperation, pain, tears, and even spit and i loved every word of it. if naruto's papers are false does iruka know naruto's true parentage. thanks for the update and can't wait for the next one.
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwe, that was soooo sad. But this story is sooo good.
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto!! That made me sooo sad!! I hope that snake and those bitches seriously get it because they deserve to be beaten down and tortured. Grrrrr those bastards! I really hope that in the end Sasuke will decide that he wants to keep Naruto and he won't give him away. It would make me very sad in the end if it didn't work out. And seriously, mad props to Gaara! I liked the fact that he was willing to look out for Naruto. If not, then I seriously could see Naruto wanting to kill himself and it would have made me even more saddened. Though, I kind of do see it in his future. My email address is angelchick383@yahoo.com. I would like it very much if you would email me and let me know when you have updates because I really enjoy reading this story!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the excellent work!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An update so soon, thank you. I like how you did this chapter.
person Sayuri
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
; - ; Poor Naru-chan~ That was awful (not the chapter, what happened). I want to keep reading and find out what's gonna happen with Sasuke. I want to believe that he won't be sold/given to his mother but I dunno. But since Sasuke seems to be falling in love with him and all, I don't know if he can give him up. Please update soon, I'm interested in seeing more development.
person charmpit
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was intense! I was literally on the edge of my seat! You did that music room chapter VERY well. I can't wait to read what happens next!
person gaara89
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! This was great! Please update soon!