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for Playing with the Toys

by Mako75

schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is evil. How can you do that to poor Naruto. You big meanie. Sasuke had better make all three of them pay, no four. don't want to forget the snake bastard. I also think Itachi should have a hand in the revenge. I know the manga version wouldn't bother, but your's seems to be a little more human.

P.S. You still havn't mentioned how Sakura got her papers changed. I understand you need to wait to explain Naruto's, but I would like to find out how hers got changed too.
person Sayuri
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, I quite enjoy it. And I want to see the rest of the story, yet I don't really want to read the next chapter because I know something terrible's gonna happen to Naruto ; - ; Please say Sasuke (or anyone) will rescue him before something happens. *sits and cries* Poor poor Naru-chan!! But their relationship seems good and I like the direction it was heading in, yet not sure what you have planned ahead so can't judge. Hope to see ya update.
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY love it how do we find out when you update i would love to know
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor naruto...its not fair! Kin should get her ass stomped majorly!....save the blond...;_;

love the story...i'm like beyond addcited to it...the last time i read it, you stopped on the chapter when Naruto stabbed Sasuke's tires after finding him high and trying to drive home....so I had a great time catching up...only for it to stop here. Man...what a heart stopper!
person Imagy
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wowzers~!
what a wonderfully angsty story, babe
so full of delicious smut...
can't wait to see what happens next~!
;D
person dyessie
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. its so cool.. what will happen now? oh where the hell is sasuke haha well i want to see naruto to fully submit to sasuke. its nice to imagine him accepting his true feelings and all. its so great. you must update sooooonn..! and oh! i believe that your story will survive the long run. :D
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NEED MORE UPDATES!!!!!!!!!
person charmpit
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

This is intense.
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been rading this story from beginning to end for the past couple of hours. I am now one of your loyal, obsessive, die hard fans. It's just soooooo good. I need now. If i beg pretty will there be another chap added this month? Please...pretty pretty please with sugar and cherries and love on top?? *pouts cutely*
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! :x


What is the big mystery behind Kushina?? O_O' Naruto's still healing quickly... could it be a bit of the fox myth will find its way into this story???