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for Playing with the Toys

by Mako75

schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude nice lol. Keep going this is getting good. I like the way your writing it. I want to see what Sasuke well come up with next for Naruto to put him in his place about. ^-^ Keep up the good work!!!

~Akira~
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke needs to be taken over the knee and slapped. ;) hehe
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a twisted, corrupted, confusing mess, and I love it!!!!
person ringpop
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"A slave is kind of… a person working on a cottonfield or something" Dude what the hell are you trying to say?
person Rosebud
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I loved this chapter!
Keep up the good work and Update soon!XD
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lmao i love how naruto is standing up for himself go naru!! >_< gaara is so creepy though...and not in the sexy "spank me-bite me-fight me" way either.
person hisoka
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hes got more balls than all the staff in the uchiha household,thats why narutos the best.
updates soon
person hisoka
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha,nice twist noone thought he was talking about ramen.keep it up
person UneLore
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, can't wait to read more ^^
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought this was going to be another sasuke (cruel master) and naruto (poor sorry sad slave) fic but this is turning out to be something a little different. the fact that you made sasuke a manwhore who slept with everyone he knows including oochimaru has made it kind of funny. and punishing naruto by taking away his ramen instead of having sasuke do something sexual do him was a nice touch. i have seen no signs of incest and hope to see none (thanks for that). can't sasuke and itachi just have a twisted relationship without bumping uglies. of course naruto would have to have known gaara before but is there a significance to him calling him by another name. anyway i really like this story so far and can't wait to see what happens next.