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for Playing with the Toys

by Mako75

schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh.. that last part was kinda... sweet? haha neweiz, i like ur story.. its good... actually.. no... its reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllly reaaaaaaaaallly good! hehe! please update soon.. xiao ^^
person Allys
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, ZOMG!!! I love this!! I love that Naruto's so rude and that Sasuke loves it XD. I have one question though, has Naruto slept with anybody?? Or has he chased them all away?? Sasuke's never gonna know what hit him, This is funny and sweet and sexy, and i can't wait for you to update XD.
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me want more...nice story i like it aloti cant wait for the next chapter
person hisoka
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow and he didnt even do anything but dance i thought he would fight someone when they pissed him off, good story keep it up!updates
person Zrina
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Naruto's spunk in this story... wow, okay, that just sounded totally perverted.... /sigh.. but you know what I mean!!
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more of this one. ^__^
person Rosebud
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was awesome! I'm really enjoying this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!^^
person noezel7
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a cute story, though you might want to get a beta. I got a little confused everytime I saw 'Uchihas' and realize you meant 'Uchiha's'. Keep going, I like where this is headed!!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, can't wait 4 next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn that jam was lucky....resting on naruto's cheek and being licked by sasuke....oh right this is a story review...i like the story alot i cant wait for ch 4...oh and it sucks to be the guy who brought the phone....