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((But Gaara didn’t want Lee to feel uncomfortable)))___what does cutting him up, bleeding him, scarring him, causing him to cry out in pain do if not make him 'uncomfortable'? And Sasuke says Gaara's not cruel. You need to explain why Gaara is not cruel-because he sure comes across as a psychotic, sick fuck. If you are writing him with some kind of mental disorder, maybe mention it. I bet Naruto will feel foolish about telling Sasuke that he could take care of himself when Sasuke told him about the people that wanted to take him into the music room and rape him if he didn't go to Europe with him. It would be nice if Naruto remembers the people who did this to him and you write about them getting punished. Fugaku also knew about the music room and its reputation from when he went to that school probably 20+ years ago_and they still don't have security posted there.Students have been getting beaten and raped in that room for more than 20 years and no one does anything about it. This is some sick, twisted, fucked up 'universe' you created for this story. So Sasuke is blaming himself for leaving Naruto alone for 1 day and this happens to him; but now Sasuke is going to leave him alone for 3 months-where's the logic in that? I also hope to read of Orochimaru's most painful and terrible punishment he receives for his part in Naruto's tragedy.

Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke_because you didn't take care of your dirty laundry when you should have (Orochimaru); he hurt your precious person (or in your universe-sex slave). This is kind of funny--Fugaku is sending Sasuke to Europe early because the strikers are getting violent? What's Sasuke going to do about that? fuck them into submission? Glare at them? This whole Europe business thing is kind of a ridiculous plot point-but I mentioned that in a previous review. So there won't be torture to find out who was behind Naruto's attack_they're just going to kill the 3? Torture before hand would have been so nice. Gaara could have done some nice cutting into them like they did Naruto. Having Gaara willing to buy Naruto to keep him safe from other buyers was sweet. You never let us know why Sasuke would turn away a bed slave for having a scar. And the only reason Naruto is scarred is because of Sasuke-so I'm assuming he'll set Naruto free and they will still love each other--that would be a nice ending. You mentioned that Sasuke might give Naruto to his mother. What for? I feel so bad for Naruto to be left in the condition he's in--and who knows how long he'll have to suffer alone and thinking/knowing that Sasuke will not want him. Will he go back to school? Will the Uchia family still take care of him? Lots of stuff up in the air and only a couple of chapters to finish it. Guess I'll have to read them to find out. Though I think some of the stuff in this story is weird_it does keep the reader interested enough to want to continue to read. The drug thing between Itachi and Sasuke hasn't come up that much-and you never really explained it all that well-and it's only come up a couple of times_so I was wondering why you even bothered to include it. Oh well. Thanks for sharing the story with us.

I don't think I've read a story where so many of the characters are so fucked up. Glad to see the tortures and deaths--would have like Orochimaru to go through some torture though. You can certainly imagine some sick stuff. Yeah for you?!

Oh, I'm so glad to read that you want to add some more to the story. I was kind of hoping it would have a more romantic ending_=where they were more partners and not master/slave. I was so happy when you had Sasuke go into Naruto's room and look at him while he slept; touching his face_and telling himself what a fool he was to think that he wouldn't want Naruto anymore. I was also kind of disturbed by Itachi thinking that Naruto made Sasuke weak. Obviously that's untrue. Sasuke was able to fix the problems in Europe and kill Orochimaru while he was still undecided about Naruto and missing him. And Itachi needs to have absolute understanding that Naruto is not to be played with. I look forward to continuing the story. Thanks

I can't wait to read the end of this story! I hope you talk a bit more about Gaara and Neji, you keep hinting intersting things about them, and then leave us hanging there waiting for more aaaah! But anyway I love the way you write and this story is great! Please continue to keep me on my toes!!

I'm glad I found this. I was y!gallery surfing - admiring it, as I'd never been there, it used to piss me off until I realized that to get most of the links people left, I had to be a member (you were the one that made me realize, so now I get all the GOOD stuff too XD) but I found this picture say it was Naruto's reaction to reading this fic, and I was like hmm... check it out.

Now, I'm a member of Y!Gallery, have read this fic, and realized that the fanart by morespecial, was a doujin I had downloaded a couple of months ago. My the internet is a small place XD

But enough of that. I'm really glad I found this. I really like where it is going. I'm also relatively new to AFF, and don't think there is a way to get automated updates. So, I was wondering - only if it's not too much trouble :) - if you could add me to a mailing list I think I recall you mentioning in a previous chapter? I would really appreciate it, as this story is too good to leave now... my address is rebelred@aapt.net.au, in case it's blocked from you view or whatever :)

Seriously. This is made of awesome and win all at once, and I can't wait for an update!! (but I will if I have to *le sigh* lol)

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jam on pancakes...i cant get the image of raspberry jam on pancakes out of my mind especially because raspberry jam has a lot of seeds in it and its cold,cold and warm dont mix in my mind not on food anyway.im glad theyre back together and sasuke finally noticed he doesnt care about the scars and he just wants naruto.well he hasnt noticed that far but hes getting there

koolness. im glad thier together agin

*overflowed with happiness*

a new chapter 8'D and it was so beautiful XD

I look forward to the future chapters (even though their only a side pairing, I hope Lee doesn't get completly broken :( *egarly awaits*)

I don't know if I have told you this before, but I absolutely LOVE it when you UPDATE!!! Thank you for doing so... This was a fantastic chapter! I feel all warm and fuzzy inside... hehehe...

Later,

~Anissa34