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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH my GOD I love you so much. You so made my week. After the horrible past few days this made it all better!!!!!!!
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Is there anyway you can email me whenever you have a chance to update? ( nelo raven at gmail ) Please update when you can. THANKS!!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is so interesting!!! I can't wait to read your next chapter! Please update soon!
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an AWESOME fic... I'll be patiently awaiting your next update.
Anissa34
Anissa34
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mm! that was good.
im so glad to be able to read an update.
i really wanna know what happens when sasuke sees naruto again.
i hope to gods it ends in a happy way :)
thanks! i look forward to more.
im so glad to be able to read an update.
i really wanna know what happens when sasuke sees naruto again.
i hope to gods it ends in a happy way :)
thanks! i look forward to more.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good read! Chapter 18 was intense!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! a lovely new chapter from you!
man... and what a wonderfully dark chapter. i love that sasuke finally gets his revenge, that you get to find out so much more that happened between the uchiha brothers and orochimaru, and that we get to see naruto acting a bit desperate. that's a wonderful touch, btw.
yeah... naruto masturbating... that was hot. i can't wait for him to see sasuke again. please tell me that sasuke's going to not care that much about the scars on naruto's face. he's going to consider the bids because he's an asshole, but when he sees cute, innocent, foxy naruto, he's not going to be able to see him. please? please tell me that. because i need a sasu/naru ending damnit.
and wow. itachi's overreaction to orochimaru mentioning sasuke.... i loved it! you got the characterization down pat. it's great stuff. itachi isn't sexually attracted to his little brother, but damnit, he's not going to let anyone else hurt him. and he's not going to let anyone else take advantage of the little uchiha.
oh! oh! and the little bit of ita/naru... *drools* of course, little naruto is a horny beast but he can't help it when itachi comes up behind him, ambushes him, and smells like sasuke. it's like a sensory kick in the head or something. i love it!
this story is great. there were some mistakes that i saw, but nothing to large of anything. i can offer my services to try to help beta while master of the rebels can't, if you'd like! you know how to get in touch love!
*loves*
man... and what a wonderfully dark chapter. i love that sasuke finally gets his revenge, that you get to find out so much more that happened between the uchiha brothers and orochimaru, and that we get to see naruto acting a bit desperate. that's a wonderful touch, btw.
yeah... naruto masturbating... that was hot. i can't wait for him to see sasuke again. please tell me that sasuke's going to not care that much about the scars on naruto's face. he's going to consider the bids because he's an asshole, but when he sees cute, innocent, foxy naruto, he's not going to be able to see him. please? please tell me that. because i need a sasu/naru ending damnit.
and wow. itachi's overreaction to orochimaru mentioning sasuke.... i loved it! you got the characterization down pat. it's great stuff. itachi isn't sexually attracted to his little brother, but damnit, he's not going to let anyone else hurt him. and he's not going to let anyone else take advantage of the little uchiha.
oh! oh! and the little bit of ita/naru... *drools* of course, little naruto is a horny beast but he can't help it when itachi comes up behind him, ambushes him, and smells like sasuke. it's like a sensory kick in the head or something. i love it!
this story is great. there were some mistakes that i saw, but nothing to large of anything. i can offer my services to try to help beta while master of the rebels can't, if you'd like! you know how to get in touch love!
*loves*
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome! Yeah Sasuke! Orochimaru is dead, haaza! Great chapter I can't wait to read more.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loved it!! Please update as soon as you can. It's been so long since the last one. But the special was awesome! I hope Sasuke doesn't send Naruto away, when it's pretty obvious that Sasuke really likes him alot :(.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wifey! That was fantastic awesomeness! I like the the way you conveyed everyones emotions from desperation to cold resolution to narutos nervousness and desires in the previous chapter. You rock hardcore babe! I can't wait to see where this goes!
Mush!
Mush!