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for Playing with the Toys

by Mako75

schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooOOOoo... I liked this chapter. It was very dark! ^^


Sasuke can't get rid of Naruto! The scars just make him even cuter!
Keep up the good work!
person Damp
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sasuke killed Orichimaru!! Yay!! Now, off to the bigger problem; Naruto. I hope Sasuke decided to keep Naruto, and if not, then, I hope Naruto ends up in really good hands!

-Damp
person gryphonwills
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad!
person gilliath
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. awesome chapter.
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice torture scene i was really impressed especially with kabuto getting his skin peeled off and liking it (you get double points for that one). it gets to be #1 for being the most original sex before you die scene ever (what a way to go huh). as always i love this story and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
person Sa-Chan
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing chapter! It really was so wonderful that I'm at a loss for words... Så jäkla bra. Jag hoppas Sasu inser vilken pärla Naruto är.
Thank you so much for this chapter, please write more soon!
person masako
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanx for the update...it's been awhile since i read this so i reread the whole thing and yep still awesome. can't wait to read more...happy writing.
person qwerty
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. You would think that Sasuke would want to drag out Orchimaru's death but I suppose that more of Itachi's style than Sasuke's. I'm kinda hoping that Sasuke will still want Naruto but with his little spiel about being beautiful and all that jazz... hopes aren't sky-high. On the other hand, Sasuke seemed a little perturbed that so many people wanted Naruto... perhaps Sasuke is still feeling possessive over Naruto?
Great job.
person animelover
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah, there's nothing like starting a saturday with ready a juicy sasunaru story. OH YEAH!!!! especially the ones where orchi gets his butt kicked. hahahaha!

thanks for the jump start!
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic so far. I look forward to future updates. And speaking as a fellow author who takes long periods of time to update, I understand, but just for fun, update soon... Please. ^.<