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Wow! What a chpater! really good! But what I REALLY can't wait to see is the moment when sasuke and naruto meet up again!

thanks for letting me know you updated. there weren't that many mistakes just a few and ya it was like a scene from a horror movie it was great...i fell bad for naruto so far poor baby. cant wait for next chapter hope sasuke doesn't get ride of naruto i might just cry



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Jamie Johnson

i'm happy to see you are still writting looking forward to the next update

I love you story so far. Can't wait for an update and I will wait for you to take your time. I like the suspence of waiting for new chapters. Is Sasuke going to end Naruto away or give him to his mother or Itachi? Or will he keep him? Sorry for asking but I like little hints. Eill be waiting for more. Sapphire-Rose

Yeah very late havent been here in a while.doesnt sasuke have the papers tsunade and jaraiya need?im actually surprised that naruto even considered helping that bitchy guy i thought hed take some of the food and just place it on the bitchy guys head in a sorta drunken uncaring way.yeah the world is full of greedy assholes beleive me ive met many and been betrayed by many still,well...thats life

Awesome chapter. Poor Naruto I hope things get better for him.
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I'm glad that you're still updating and that you aren't going to abandon it. It's a shame that the updates aren't very quick, but i'm willing to wait especially for such a great story. However i know what you mean by the needy impatient reviews about updating etc. It's hard to update quickly, and especially if you want to do a good job on the chapter. So keep doing what you're doing, no matter the pace. Your loyal fans will be by your side to keep reading. =]

I must say, this is one of the most captivating fics I've read in quite some time, I'm impressed. Your writing flows beautifully overall and for the most part the descriptions are tangible. I actually had a question for you as well, would you mind terribly much if I did some fanart for you/based or inspired by this story? After getting into the story i became enchanted with my fanart muse once more hehe... He does love yaoi so, and as long as it is alright with you I'd like to indulge him with a few pieces this fic has inspired. You can IM me @ msn or Yahoo ... glampixie and xxglampixiexx respectively.

I'm so happy I happened upon this story, and thank you for sharing it with us.

-L

That was sad poor poor Naruto kun

well, like i told you, i got around to reading this story, and i'm rather disappointed that it's taken me so long to do so. this is really good. and i'm quite surprised at the interesting, provocative content of it. i love the characterization and the way you bring the characters together. it's well thought out, it's beautifully written, and it's incredible.

i love naruto. i love that he's so submissive to sasuke only in bed. he's so rude and arrogant, and just what he's supposed to be. he's naruto. and it's awesome. you did an amazing job writing him too. and gods, my heart breaks for him. i love the drama of if he'll be allowed to stay with sasuke or not. if he'll be allowed to continue on living with the only master he's liked so far. and i love the way you wrote in minato and kushina. it's was creative and well done. naruto's parents being activists are something i could see. especially with minato.

i like naruto's attitude. he's still head strong, but at the same time, he's aware of his position in society, in life. he knows his boundaries and what he can and can't do. and he pushes at them as much as possible. and i really like that he does his best to please sasuke, that he tries to find out more about his master so that he won't be sent away. he can't afford to be sent away, and he understands that.

and now, broken like he is, my heart breaks for him. what's itachi going to do with him? what's itachi going to make him suffer through? i don't know what's going to happen, but i'm at the edge of my seat waiting with anticipation.

and sasuke! i love the way you wrote sasuke. he's broken and desperate and all he needs is naruto and he doesn't even know it. i love that about him, but i'm breaking for him. i would love to know more about sasuke. about his getting in drugs, and the way he's so dependent on itachi. and i would love to know what happened between sasuke and the orochimaru. but i think i can gather a guess about it. i'm not really sure if i want to read it, but being as it's probably angsty, you know i do!

i love the way he handles naruto. he's confused about what he really wants himself and he's not sure if he can handle being the complete master of somebody else, but i love the way he's handling naruto. although, i have to say: bastard! he really needs to learn to trust naruto a bit more. and to take his own feelings into account when it comes to naruto. naruto needs him now more than ever. and the way he just made naruto fall in love with him, only to leave him because he was hurt? bastard. but it really does fit with the character you've created within this story. after all, he's an uchiha and he needs beautiful things to make him happy.

now, for the rest of the cast. i love the near sociopathic nature you gave gaara. he's so desperate to not feel anything, but at the same time, he's kind of falling apart, isn't he? he's ocd, and he needs lee, because lee gives him sometimes to be happy about. lee allows him to be different, and lee doesn't talk about his master in a negative light to anyone, hm? lee is the perfect pet for gaara.

and neji, neji is beautiful, and i'm not sure what i think about the crack that is neji/sakura, but its all good. because the crack that is sakura/tenten is hotter still. i like the dynamics you've given the characters, the way you make sasuke and neji play against each other, the way you make them so close and so perfect. it's incredible!

and kiba the wanna-be whore. brilliant. i love it.

yes, i have to tell you, i'm quite enjoying this story. and i can't wait for itachi to take out the bad guys. is there going to be more hints of ita/naru? because that would be kind of hot. although sasuke would be really pissed. but with naruto believing that sasuke's going to throw him away anyways, it wouldn't matter. would it?

good story. update soon please?

*molests*