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for Playing with the Toys

by Mako75

person kecsy
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read your story last night...the whole. Gosss that's tha best what I have ever read. The whole day I was thinking...'what the hell wiil happen to Naruto'... or 'If Sasuke sells Naruto I would buy him and cut Sasuke's balls down XD' I don't say that 'please update soon' I know too how annoying it is. I started to drow the music room scene during english classX3 I hope I can finish it but the teacher looked at me a bit pissed when she saw that I drawing...okey so I just want to say thanks for this miraculous story X3 *bow*
person Damp
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It took a while for me to stop pressing the 'down' button on my keyboard. ;-; I was so sad when i finished the story! HEARTACHE!! I FEEL AN EMPTYNESS IN MY CHEST!!

-Damp *DAMNIT!!! I DIDN'T WANT IT TO END!!! I FINISHED THE CHAPTER TO DAMN QUICKLY!!!*
person Githany
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm all for waiting because it's totally worth it. Thank you very much for sharing this piece of awesomeness :)
person qwerty
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved the raw emotion from Naruto; it was well-written.
Awesome job!
person dark_aura
schedule June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep 'em comming!
great story
type faster plz

u better continue dis
dont be like the others who abandon their stories..
person mmartini
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please update! I fall in love with this story! !t is so original I can't guess the end and I totally anxious because of it! So please do not abandon this story. Thank you, thank you!
person masako
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. i can't wait till you post again...thank you
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THATS SO SAD I WAS HOPING SASUKE WOULD KEEP NARUTO STILL AM :)



schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quite the vengeful Sasuke!! He just got the drugs mostly out of his system. Now he has to go through Naruto withdrawal while away in Europe. Boy just can't catch a break! >:) hehehe Keep up the good work!
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwweee. Poor Naru-chan. Poor Sasuke. I hope things turn out okay.
=)