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by Sapphirexkat2

schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love slutty little SasUKE-kun! Especially when he begs for his ass to be pounded harder by a thick hard cock. Love your stories. Cheers!
person R.G.
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah. I...I cannot express in words how beautiful this fic was. I wish you'd add another part to it - because there's so much more to be said about this universe, so many questions I'd love to have answered, about how they'd go about conducting a relationship, what happens after this...

Anyway. I enjoyed reading this, beyond words. Hot, so full of characters and situations that all seemed perfect...a very lovely read. I hope to see more of this! :) - R.G.
person Casmut
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking Christ. O_O If that wasn't some of the hottest Itachi/Sasuke smut ever, I don't know what the hell could've been! Oh wow... *-* Wow. XD

Smut Smut Smut! Woooo!!!

Loved the NaruSasu implication. Totally could've imagined that! Although I wished when Naruto locked that door there woulda been a threesome. <.< Great work nonetheless! I like the whole porn star idea, and Itachi wanting another night with Sasuke. ~grin~ Dude, I totally am in love with you. XD ~thumbs-up~
person illiads
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally go for OOC Itachi/Sasuke fics because OOC annoys me. But, I have to say, that was simply hot. In terms of HAWT levels, that hit the charts. In terms of plot, however.. Plenty of that! Just slow it down a bit I guess? You can't have Sasuke going "I LOVE YOU" all of a sudden over mere sexual attraction right? Good job. You have potential!
person oztan
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Write more of the same pairing.
person happyme
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! i LOVE it! <3<3 i think i have to buy a new computer, coz this one is covered in drool... ;P
person a reader
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh mah friggin' God! You are so good with these stories! The plot and the sex left me all hot.
P.S. The silent ones huh? *grins*
person Hen
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very very hot AU. You should write more stories!
person missing_nin15
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*is ded*

That was thermonuclearly hot. (was that a word?)

And I just loved how Itachi kept calling Sasuke "kitten". Yes, it's a crime I say that Sasuke isn't a canon ninja-kitty boy!

*sigh* Now I wish that at least one day of everymonth were Sasuke's Bday, and you'd gift us with your mind-blowing lemons every month. Tee-hee! xD

Anyway, great one-shot!
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy Uchihacest, but not. I love it. Sasuke was such a slut and Itachi was sooooooooooo hot. More please :)