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for Want, Take, Keep

by Sapphirexkat2

person missing_nin15
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, me again. Sorry for the double review, but I think there's a small mistake you made which I had meant to address in my first review (but I kinda forgot, too distracted by the hotness, ahaha xD;; ).

Somewhere in the beginning you mentioned that Sasuke was rich as hell, and he lived in his family mansion. But when he was driving to Jiraiya's place, it was said that Sasuke chose to live in a three story house rather than a mansion.


person Aiyanna
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I can say that I just love "Welcome to the Mile High Club"! But this is by far the best oneshot I´ve read, ever!! ItaSasu is my favourite pairing and u write it so damn good! Thank you so much! //A
person ry
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy. crap. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that is by far the sexiest storyline i've ever read... and i'm not even exaggerating nor do i say that to every story. i was forcing myself to read slower so i could completely take in all the details, because i was getting way too excited while reading it. i was afraid i'd finish the story and i'll have no more, so i re-read parts that i really like before going on, keeping track of the scrollbar and hoping that i wouldn't reach the bottom... seriously i've been waiting SO long, too long for something as hot as this... uchihacest is so underrated, i really hoped for a good fic, one that just doesnt feature sasuke's revenge, angst, the whole 'you killed the clan thing'... and i found what i wanted. i can't believe it... words alone cannot describe what i think about this story... i'm just very, very amazed right now ...
and do you know how much i loved 'welcome to the mile high club'? i didn't even know you wrote it, until i was about to review this story, and i saw your username. and i was just like, NO WONDER! because that fic was just as hot, but i'll be honest here, this story was even hotter. i loved every, single, part. everything fits together, no errors, no OOC, no lame sex scenes, no turn-offs... before sasuke met itachi i was getting excited for him. and how they immediately got off on each other made me sooooooooo happy and horny (XD) and when the act was over i was, like sasuke, desperate for another meeting with itachi, and when it ended happily i just took a moment to lean back in my chair with a happy sigh. itachi was just so itachi, and sasuke being himself (a whore XD).. just fabulous... i will re-read it for many, many times over and over, and recommend to anyone!! thank you SO SO SO SO!!! much for writing, and please never leave the uchihacest fandom. we need you !!!! *worships*
person ry
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh and one more thing -- sorry for double posting -- if this meant to be a birthday present for sasuke, i'm sure he's WAY more than just satisfied. ;P
person Vixenia
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm that was yummy. ^^ thanks for the meal
person Shiola
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is just tooooo good. the characters made me smile and it was just a damn good story. but now i want the other stories like with gaara/naruto and kakashi/iruka-i'm hooked. :) either way, amaaazing job!
person vampire sawyer
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I am speechless. How many time did Sasuke climax? I lost count at two.
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm that was delicious, so fucking hot. More, you have to do more!
person ringpop
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you fucking serious?....*Asks self* Are you fucking serious?......a one-shot..........seriously do you think for ONE second that the readers of this fic are going to allow you to get away with that bull-shit?! I oughtta fly through this computer screen and bust you in the head......Am I mad?! HELL YEAHH I'M MAD!!! this is like the best (detailed) fic I've read since Monthly Reprive!!!....(wait....did YOU write that fic???) NE ways!! this is a FANTASTIC story....I really don't understand how you think this is one-shot material.....because I can DEFFINATLY see a fucking Harry Potter-thick novel comming from this plot.....DAMN......you are one awsome writer babe....Awsome!
person Kei
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Although he was as rich as hell, he had chosen to live in a nice three story house instead of a mansion."
that line knocked me out, but i forgot about it in light of...other events, and remberd it just now. three storys indead. *laughs*

anyway, risking souding totaly blown-over, this is one of the best adult-ish storys i have *ever* read, and by far the abosolute best ItaSasu....and thats all i can really say. i've noticed that, (in your other storys) you got the Uchihacest DOWN. and Itachi's charaterization was sexy as hell ('kitten'! *dies) also orgional plot(ish). damn amazing, yup.

~Kei