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for Want, Take, Keep

by Sapphirexkat2

person Kei
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Zee_Kay speeks the truth, you MUST contiue with this, you've got more than enough material to work with to get a nice long story! add more...please?
person Dragon7
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so FUCKING HOTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I hope you make this into a long story and not just a one shot. I hope their another chapter because I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Allys
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, It was ridiculously fantastic XD. But then everything you write is. You have a talent for making things so hot they leave the reader breathless XD. And this has a nice little plot too XD. I love how nothing was as it seemed, and I adore how you write Sasuke XD. He should always be slutty and begging for it. LOL, and your Itachi adn even Naruto are as hot as ALL... (insert anything you want here). God and the kitteness XD. I have a failing for Sasuke being a kitten, he just so is an oversexed kitty, voracious and sensuous, LOL and Kishimoto agrees XD, The uchiha and their nin cats and all XD, LOL. Anyway, thanks for this XD. I'm sure Sasuke positively adored his birthday present ♥ ♥ ♥
person DevilLived
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One word: WOW! Wowzie wow wow. That was AWESOME!!!! Great job. When I read the summary and found out that the Uchiha bros weren't related in this fic I was immedietly curious to see how you wrote it.

That was one of the best ItaSasu's I've ever read (claps) And we all love Slutty!Sasuke. Great job!
person crystal
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally yummy ItaSasu! I love your slutty! uke! sasuke, especially with itachi.. XDDD Keep writing more!!
person Kuronue
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good! Excellent! The writing is superb, you didn't rush the story, and the characters remained believable. You should be writing more.