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for In the Beginning

by vanessaclarke

person Leeana69
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of the dozen times I have read this story this is the first time I have reviewed. I'm sorry, forgive me. ;_;

Excellent writing, I love this pairing and you do it so amazingly. :drools over the story:
person Kodos
schedule December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmm, me likey. This was just a delicious bit of backstory. I really enjoyed it! Thank you for writing it. ♥ I like how Itachi thought he was a pervert because Naruto looks so young. Sixteen to eighteen isn't so bad! Ummm, still illegal, but not so bad anyway. ;D
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this fic was great!!!!! I loved it!

One part kinda reminded me of Harry Potter though..."They stumbled to the couch and fell onto it while he tried to suck the boy's soul out through his mouth." Since when did Itachi become a dementor? lol ^_^
person despairs
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now that the original has been completed...i am extra excited to see how this story turns out :D
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehehehhehe

man, i love your "what the hell.." stories. ^^ they are so awesomely cool and funny at the same time.

sure, i knew they'd get together in the end from reading the other story, but damn it all if i wasn't cheering the two along the entire time. Itachi worrying to himself that he might be secret childmolester was the best. Heh. I love it!

Keep up the good work. I'm still waiting to find out how the wedding will go. ;)
person Q
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....teehee.

And now I can't stopped giggling. XD
person despairs
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay a prequel! The first chapter is perfect already and i'm soo excited to see how Itachi and Naruto meet and fall in love.
I'm rating this a 5 of course..thank you for writing a sequel, you are the best! *grins*

Oh btw your other story Art and Artifice is still one of my favorites.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray - so good to see Itachi and Naruto falling for each other. Such a sweet story, unlike the dirty, hot "Jesus What the Hell Was That" I don't know which I like more :)
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. i really love how you portray their relationship. is jwthwt? over or is there more? i really love that story.
person Rosebud
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I loved it!
This story was so awesome and I'm glad that you wrote it!
I like how Itachi was straight at first and then 'only' had eyes for Naruto. That was cute!
Ooohhhh, I just love this pairing and I hope that you write LOTS and LOTS of Itachi/Naruto in the future!
Keep up the good work...
~Later