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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how could you just stop there I want to know what happens next. Please hurry and update! This is just too cute!!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh, this story is totally great. I love it. I love how they're dom/sub. And I love mpreg. And I love your pairings too. hehe. I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't be darft of course I want you to continue....I absolutly LOVE ultra ukes....it's the best of yaoi
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Cheers
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Cheers
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was definitely entertaining. I'm not completely sure I should take it seriously, but I definitely found it entertaining. One problem though, I want to see more individuality between the 'semes' and the 'ukes'. At this point it's like all the semes are like 1 character and the ukes the same. Even to the point where instead of individual reactions everything is described as if it's the action of one person. I wish that you'd focus a bit on the individuals.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty cool. can't wait for the next chapter =)
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a nice read I suppose. However there is a problem. You're not giving the characters too much definition. They're acting alike. Like blushing at the same time, and pinching the uke's asses at the same time.
They need to act differently have their own personalities. Own actions.
They need to act differently have their own personalities. Own actions.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dunno what to say or think. I am thinking positive things. I found this story quite funny and entertaining. I didn't take it seriously. I took it as a comedy which I hope it was. Dear god if you really are serious about making this a story that should not be taken lightly. ;)
Anyway, update soon. I'll be waiting.
Anyway, update soon. I'll be waiting.
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah this will be a bast to read! I love the parings and I like your style! ceep it up! and update soon!
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the fantastic 4!!! i love it!!!
it suits then to a T.
what i would like to see are flashbacks to how and when each of the F4 meet their ukes. and to be honest i really don't like the way the F4 refer to their boys as their women. maybe if the F4 didn't say it out loud and kept it in their toughts. the story is awesome so i'll be happy as long as update every 5 minutes........no?
how about every day?????
keep up the great writting!!
it suits then to a T.
what i would like to see are flashbacks to how and when each of the F4 meet their ukes. and to be honest i really don't like the way the F4 refer to their boys as their women. maybe if the F4 didn't say it out loud and kept it in their toughts. the story is awesome so i'll be happy as long as update every 5 minutes........no?
how about every day?????
keep up the great writting!!