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I LOVE IT please write more

hehehe that was so funny and finally a Gaaxlee it's been forever since i'v read one.

I don't want to come off as a bitch, believe you me...

I still noticed some typos, but that's normal, nothing to stress over. The paragragh structure was a little thrown off, but that could have happen when the file was uploaded.

The only two problems I have are the four semes and ukes...they act too much alike, each character has a personiatly that would benefit the group they're in and frankly make the fanfiction more interesting in the long run.

Just just to point out...if someone grabbed a handful of Naruto's ass...he'd bitch slap the mo-fo, even if he was in love with said person.

I'd also like to see flashbacks on how the pairs met and why want each other and so on, I feel that it's very important for the story line. Just try not to cramp all four couples into one chapter, otherwise it could get confusing and be much more work for you. I had to find that out the hard way.

Now, I have to find me some NejiGaara to nurse my craving since I'm not the biggest GaaraLee fan out there.

Hugs and Kisses,

Starry