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for Enslaving Naruto

by akiravadel

person shai69
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, are you planning on continuing it? I hope that you do and hey if it's just a case of writers block I understand, so please understand I'm not trying to rush you. I would just be a little sad to see this story get forgotten.
person lokivsanubis
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh i like where this is going. Can't wait for more! :P
person littleolmee
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah thank you, I'm glad I could see your vision. Nice chapter. Is Sasuke fighting his inner dark-self that wants to make Naruto his possession? I mean he spoke of owning Naruto, like his brother did, only to now speak of love and them being lovers. Sasuke never did like to do anything like his brother did so it is understandable that he would want different with Naruto even if some hidden part would want that. Hee, hee Sasuke just standing there watching the show. I laughed at the part where Tsunade thought Naruto would be safer at Sasuke's house . . . well, I guess it all how you look at it huh? I mean that's like asking the fox to guard the hen house you know?

"Here Sasuke take this cute little uke to your house and make sure you keep him nice and safe." Insert drooling prevy Sasuke holding cute little uke Naruto. "Oh I know just the spot." You pan over and you find the two naked, Sasuke holding Naruto on his lap. "Here Naruto my lap is the safest place for you, I even have an anchoring device."

Okay sorry about that, I really need to go work on my own stories don't I? LOL!

Anyway, liked how Sasuke was being good to Naruto, taking care of him and all. Naruto getting all flustered was well done, loved his excuse. "I got to go pee."

Can't wait to see what you have in mind for this next, keep up the good work and take care.
person lokivsanubis
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
greatness cant wait 4 more
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww.. mushy goodness. ^^
person qwerty
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very glad that you continued this. Nice job.
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cool. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad you continued the story. =)
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I am incredibly turned around and impressed by what you did with this chapter! You've turned a somewhat gross but semi-interesting oneshot into something incredibly three-dimentional with alot of intrest! <3

The levels of personal insite and depression just skyrocketed and I am absolutely inlove with your story. The suicide makes perfect sense (what with the trauma, isolation, regret, doubt, and guilt) and what will become of Naruto now that he's resealed and stripped of all the power he's come to depend on?? Additionally... I thought the two of them merged? If he's now some kind of hybred demon or something, how was he managed to be resealed? Of course you also put forth the notion that its different seals and more than one of them.. so perhaps it just seals the demon sides of him? I dunno. All I know is that I can not wait for chapter three.

Keep up the good work! You're getting better by the update. ^^
person Rosebud
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh, I LOVED this chapter. I'm glad that Sasuke and Naruto are so loving towards one another. I really wonder if things are going to be that simple. Is Itachi, going to come looking for Naruto??? Hum, I can't wait to find out!!! o.0
Anyway, I hope you update soon. I'm really enjoy reading this fic!XD
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mushy