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glad they got em back. still, they're going to have a LOT of fall out to deal with when they get back. Damn, I hope they baby's okay.

I love Sasuke and Naruto in this! Sasuke trying so hard to remember Naruto and not being able to stay away from him. And Naruto pregnant is just so cute. But I hate the women. Tsunade and Sakura just seemed evil and until chapter 6 I didn't think they could be trusted not to hurt Naruto. Well, I still don't trust Sakura.

Oh, but I did catch one error... when Kakashi broke down the door Sai was there but you also had him in the tree guarding Rin. I felt bad for Gaara. Maybe him & Neji... : )

Ok, I'm reviewing this and I haven't even read it yet. This reason for that is this: I hate you!!! And the reason I hate you, is because you decided to update what I'm sure is going to be an amazing story right when I'm really getting into writing one of my own stories!!! Had your chapter not be that long it wouldn't be a problem, but they are giant and I want to read it soooo bad!!! So now I'm torn between keeping my writing going and reading this story!! I honestly am not sure what I'm going to do. Either way, know this: I WILL be reading it and reviewing when I've finished what you have up!!

~nekluvshp
nekluvshp@hotmail.com

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I had such a good long review written and I accidentally pushed a button that changed the page!!! GAH!!!! I can't even remember everything that I said!!!! waaah!!!!!!!
Um.......
Oh yeah, I started with; I read your story instead of working on mine. um..... idr what came next.
I said I love mpreg and that a preggo Naruto is just soooo adorable!!! I hope it's a boy!!!
In this last chapter, when Naruto's pregnancy was being sped up, I kept thinking, "Oh my god!! I hope his stitches don't pop out." You even said it wasn't healing very quickly. So I keep getting these scary images of the stitches popping out and his insides falling out!!! Perhaps the stitches are reinforced with chakra?
Then I said something like; I hope there's nothing wrong with the baby. Naruto said something didn't feel right. Maybe you put a little foreshadowing in there? Maybe when Ayako(?) asked if they were having twins, it was right on the money?? I don't really care as long as their all happy and healthy!!!
I hope by the end, that stupid anti-gay law is lifted!!! And maybe other gay couples could use the jutsu too? *cough*kakashi and iruka*cough*

I think that's the gist of what I had before. Either way, it's still the longest review I've ever written. You should feel honored!!!

~nekluvshp
nekluvshp@hotmail.com

I finally got time to catch up on this fic. I know sasuke didn't remember everything in the end but I do have to agree with tsunade, the uchiha does work fast! haha!

I wanted to start by saying that I am really liking this story so far and thank you for updating! I have one or two questions though. You wrote that Neji, Sai, and Gaara were hiding out in safe house watching Rin and then you wrote that they were with the rescue party. At first I thought it was supposed to be some kind of elaborate plot to trick or mind game that was being played on the boys. But then you had Tsunade there and not even the spy in the village would have known she would be because she had to sneak out to get there.
Also, she performed the jutsu that only she can perform and that only she, Kakashi, and Neji knew about (I do not think either of them are the spy).

So the question is did you accidentally put Neji, Sai, and Gaara in the rescue party when you were going through trying to figure out what everyone would be doing in a pitched battle and forgot they were not there or did something happen in between them being taken to the hideout and the rescue that we will find out about later? Just curious. Oh, by the way it is ANBU, not AMBU. Do not know if that was a mistype or what.

On a positive note the story is (for the most part) very well paced and I like the fact that post Itachi and now that he is a father that Sasuke has become a little OOC and is opening up to Naruto more. I was oddly kind of expecting something to happen between some combination of Neji, Gaara, and Sai when they were trapped underground on guard duty together (preferably Neji/Gaara *wink*). Anyway, hope I have not overstepped my bounds and hope that you update soon because I am anxious to see what happens next and if they find Orochimaru and put him out of everyone else's misery!

I really like this story. I get excited when I see a new chapter. The only thing that is a little frustrating is "AMBU", it is actually spelled "ANBU". I know it's kind of nit picky but the "AM" letter combination does not exsist in Japanese. Again, I really do love the story. I hope the council changes their mind about Naruto and Sasuke, that way Kakashi and Iruka can be together as well!!

Interesting chapter... I hope the next update comes soon. :0)

I hope you will continue with this fic. They are so many mpreg fics here, very good ones who were abandoned and thats really a pity.

So how much does Sasuke remeber? Just the sex and post the sex or the whole deal? I'm so excited Sasuke knows... I love that even with out his memories he was jealous of Neji and Naruto being so close.