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for One Night Of Sin

by yaoigurl06

schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Sai knows. The whole of Root knows *I think :/

Did someone block Sasu's memory on purpose?
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I'm a baker... not a real you know sell my sweets kind but its one of my hobbies and I'm GREAT at is... so I will bake you LOTS of cookies of your chosing if you just give me MORE of this... and soon! :) I'm totaly loving protective Neji & Kakashi and confused Sasuke and poor Naruto who is just in love and wanting to have what little pleasant memories he can to take back to the Sand with him.... *sighs* Just lovely.
person LoveSasukeNaruto
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW...I love this story, please continue writing the rest of it because I'm too excited to know what's going to happen with this beautiful couple, and also please make Sasuke know that he's the father of Rin and the following up baby in Naruto's womb. Thank you!!! ^O^
person DarkAngelBlossom
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! He's pregnant again. Have they every heard of a condom, if not they are going to have a lot of kids because every time they have sex he gets pregnant!
person nea
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy reading your story very much! Do you have all your pairups for the story set yet? Will Tsunade find out about Naruto being pregnant? Looking forward to reading your next chapter! :-D
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why does everyone think Naru's orange jacket is ugly? lol
I hope nobody saw Naru or Temari >.>
person DarkAngelBlossom
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW! I loved this chapter, and I absolutely enjoyed the love scene. ^_^
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this fic and hope you write more of it very soon. I'd love to see where this goes... oh yeah how soon before Harry discovers he's pregnat again? He did just have unprotected sex again... 3 months after his last child. Trust me, I know that was possible because my sister did it, they call it is Irish twins!
person moodysavage
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is reallllllly good! I sooooo want Sasuke (and Shika) to find out the truth! But what the heck with the evil women at the beginning and using Hinata to experiment? That was creeeppy! Like now they can't be trusted and all the men really need to get out of town creepy.
person moodysavage
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And about the obnoxious husband who lost his mind situation? Sorry to hear about what you're going through. Time really does make it easier to forget (some things take more time than others of course). And reading does totally help occupy the mind that otherwise can drive you crazy with going in circles thinking about how wrong life can sometimes get. I hope you're holding up ok and don't give up on finding what makes you happy.