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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! well, i'm glad you're okay, and i look forward to seeing another chapter!~
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I'm glad that you're all ok, that's so scary.
Are you nuts? Don't worry about our impatient arses, you gotta do what you gotta do.
I can't believe I really said that, when I look forward to your updates so much. *sweat drops*
You're doing a good job btw, hehe.
Anyway, you just take care of yourself, and I'll hope to hear/read more from you in future!
Bcjink
Are you nuts? Don't worry about our impatient arses, you gotta do what you gotta do.
I can't believe I really said that, when I look forward to your updates so much. *sweat drops*
You're doing a good job btw, hehe.
Anyway, you just take care of yourself, and I'll hope to hear/read more from you in future!
Bcjink
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE AS FAST AS POSSIBLE!!!!!! I've only read this one chapter and I love this story. I feel so sorry for Gaara though, he needs a boyfriend.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, great story!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Naruto would agree to have some random Jutsu used on him, wouldn't he? o.0
Hum... well, I must say that this story is rather interesting. And I like the fact that being gay in Konoha is taboo; it opens up a lot of possibilities for the plot. Also, I not really a huge fan of Iruka/Kakashi (there's only one other story that I've really enjoyed reading, that was of this pairing) and yet, I LOVE them in here!!! ^^
PLEASE try and update soon. I'm looking forward to reading more!XD
Hum... well, I must say that this story is rather interesting. And I like the fact that being gay in Konoha is taboo; it opens up a lot of possibilities for the plot. Also, I not really a huge fan of Iruka/Kakashi (there's only one other story that I've really enjoyed reading, that was of this pairing) and yet, I LOVE them in here!!! ^^
PLEASE try and update soon. I'm looking forward to reading more!XD
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My only question is why would Naruto want Sasuke to go back to Orochimaru? Seems a rather odd request coming from the blonde. (Unless, of course, there's some back story to accompany it?) ^^
Most of the fanfics shy away from a notion that homosexuality might be taboo. Its intersting to read a fic that includes it (not that I am not filled with outrage at the thought, but those feelings pass that the notion of a good story.) Of course, I do not undestand why everybody would jump the conclusion of A=B and that his "homosexuality treatments" would have something to do with him bolting after being hit by some random jitsu. The logic jumps dont really make sense, unless, it had something to do with that particular jitsu that nobody's saying anything about.
Final thoughts: poor Gaara. He never wins. YOu should turn this into a threesome between Sasuke, Naruto and Gaara. That way everyone wins, including us, the readers. Hehehehe. ^^ (or not. keep going with your original plot. don't let anybody influence you different! huzzah!)
Most of the fanfics shy away from a notion that homosexuality might be taboo. Its intersting to read a fic that includes it (not that I am not filled with outrage at the thought, but those feelings pass that the notion of a good story.) Of course, I do not undestand why everybody would jump the conclusion of A=B and that his "homosexuality treatments" would have something to do with him bolting after being hit by some random jitsu. The logic jumps dont really make sense, unless, it had something to do with that particular jitsu that nobody's saying anything about.
Final thoughts: poor Gaara. He never wins. YOu should turn this into a threesome between Sasuke, Naruto and Gaara. That way everyone wins, including us, the readers. Hehehehe. ^^ (or not. keep going with your original plot. don't let anybody influence you different! huzzah!)
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good. usually they make konoha in the male/male of naruto like san francisco. like konoha's supposed to be the gay life central. and while i believe in free love as it seems most people who read this section it's nice once in a while to see a story where the laws are against them. what kinda different struggles would our favorite characters have to deal with. wither to be with the one they love and leave or be miserable conforming to their rules and stay. are they going to do something to naruto when he comes home knocked up. i mean the hokage and hinata are not on his side to me at all and hinata is a desperate woman or at least this is how she seems to me now. wow i wait with bated breath for the next chapter.
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far...I love your plot!!!!!
Even without the lemon I still find the scene
romantic between Naruto and Sasuke....
Just don't let him hurt Gaara too much,'cos
he could be a great ally in the future.....
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
Even without the lemon I still find the scene
romantic between Naruto and Sasuke....
Just don't let him hurt Gaara too much,'cos
he could be a great ally in the future.....
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting take on the characters. I'm not used to seeing Tsunade and Hinata as the "bad" guys, especially sweet little Hinata. It's unexpected (and a little sad since I like Hinata so much), but somehow refreshing to see a different twist on things. Interesting story so far. Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story plot!! I hope later on you can write a lemon! :D