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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought the wake up sceen was perfect. This was really something that Naruto would do. Great chapter. Hope you write again soon
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, hmmm.. I'm kind of itching to see how Naruto is going to react when he finds out that Sasuke can drain his chackra. That little Sasuke bastard making it damn near impossible for Naruto to win fairly against him. I loved Naruto's reaction after he first woke up. I can't wait for the next addition ^_^
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was interesting. I wonder what Sasuke will tell Naruto about the braclet? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe that it would be nearly impossible for you to disappoint anyone with this chapter. Naruto's waking up was perfect. I actually spit out my tea when one of his first questions was 'where are my orange pants'. That's pure Naruto, right there.
I love that you let the readers be privy to Sasuke's thoughts. And when Sasuke talks to Naruto about things worse than physical hurts... amazing. I am looking forward to the next. Until then...
I love that you let the readers be privy to Sasuke's thoughts. And when Sasuke talks to Naruto about things worse than physical hurts... amazing. I am looking forward to the next. Until then...
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story so far its got the right amount of funny and angst. If you still need a beta email me, I'll be glad to help in any way I can.
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I have been waiting for an update... you just made my day. LOL.
Well things seem to be getting more and more interesting... wonder how much of the truth Sasuke will tell Naruto... and more importantly how Naruto will react to it.
Please update soon.
-Akiru-
Well things seem to be getting more and more interesting... wonder how much of the truth Sasuke will tell Naruto... and more importantly how Naruto will react to it.
Please update soon.
-Akiru-
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I didn't even realize this had been updated! I totally slightly freaked out when I saw that it was, hehehe. Things are certainly getting interesting! I can't wait for more!!!
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sasuke gets royally beat up for rigging the right.
-Damp *No sex for you mister!!*
-Damp *No sex for you mister!!*
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! I need more! MORE! want more... *tears*
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how Naruto's reaction to being kidnapped wasn't over the top. Then again, he doesn't know about the bracelet. Oh dear, what will Naruto do when he finds out what Sasuke did to him. On a side note, watch your grammar.