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for Midnight's Moon

by spoon10488

person Ivy
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so cool... can't wait for them to hook up ^_^ But really you're a very talented writer.
person mls
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!
person a kitsunes light
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No yo didnt disapoint anyone at least not me. bUt I cant wait for the next and all that about reviving te clan , just everything I love this fic!!!!! huryy PLEASE!!!!!!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is the first time that naruto has been consious the whole story and it was cute ,funny, and had a little drama in it to even it out. that was a cruddy (ha ha ) move that sasuke did to naruto with the bet and not even telling him about the bracelet. i can't wait to see what happens next chapter i just know naruto's gonna find out about the bracelet and what it does.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see an update. I really love the way you've portrayed Sasuke. I love him dark and possessive. I also like how the bracelet didn't work out exactly as planned. It's obvious that Sasuke and Naruto are going to fall in love and I doubt the blond could love someone who would force him into compliance that way. He's too much of a fighter and that would sort of break his spirit. I hope to se another update soon. You keep me on the edge of my seat.
person caidanu
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
spoon I just wanted to tell you that as always great work; sorry that this review is a little short but I at least wanted to leave you something. I can't wait for the next chapter in this fic.
person hisoka
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow,got sorta sick woke up in a daze and passed back out.i wonder, did he really see sasuke when he woke up or did he think it was an illusion.aww... he fell back asleep holding on to the 'imaginary' sasuke cute, hope he wakes up soon its been how long that we've been reading sasukes perverted thoughts, not that i mind, just wanna see narutos reaction to being kidnapped by him.hope you update soon
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH my goodness! What an intense chapter. It is kinda funny seeing Sasuke realizing that he didn't think the idea all the way through. I can't wait for Naruto to wake up... really wake up, it's going to be great.
Excellent chapter and the fact that it ended with Sasuke and Naruto all wrapped up together just made my morning.
;)
person Jien
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting, I hope for faster updates with longer chapters. Please update soon!!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there just wanted to pop by and say it was a n awesome chapter.

hehe

moving out again =0>