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for Midnight's Moon

by spoon10488

person nyge98
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story. I hope you will continue. I checked out your other story and it seems really good as well. Please keep writing for both stories
person shai69
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there spoon, I've decided that I need a temp. break from studying and I've been meaning to review this fic for awile (personally I think that a good portion of my break this month will be catching up on reviews). I love it and I can't wait until you post the next chapter, whenever you can of course. I know that things have been completely insane for you right now but hopefully it will get better. Again I love this story and now I have to get back to much needed studying. Take care.
person kati
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i just read all of this and i really like it! sasuke i soooo creepy! XD perhaps you could get a beta tho cause you make quite a few mistakes, you can still understand but its really annoying and breaks up the flow of your story. I was just wondering -- in the first place you said that the bracelet glowed red when activated, but when sasuke did it it glowed blue... does that mean that something went wrong? Is that why naruto passed out?! (is hysterical) Poor naru-chan!! Sasuke is so weird! (but we love him for it ^_^) I hope that there will be some drama when the konoha ninjas catch up with them! xx
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yaaay update, MARSHMELLOW'S! now i'm going to crave them, i'll have to go buy some tomorrow!
so naruto's awake...well, sort of anyway...
I realize that it's the end of the semester, and ur probably insanely busy but i hope u update soon!
person Telpei
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, interesting so far!!! :D I can't wait to see Naruto explode when he figures out what Sasuke did. Even though he was getting beaten up in Konoha and he might have wanted to leave, I bet he won't be happy when he finds out he's practically wearing a slave collar ^^ Go Sasuke!! XD

One question... I thought the bracelet was supposed to glow red when it was 'activated'. Since it only went blue, does that mean Sasuke didn't do it properly? Maybe Naruto will find out it isn't working and then ~pretend~ it's working just to screw with our favourite Uchiha's head... but wait, this IS Naruto we're talking about. No way he'd be crafty enough to come up with a scheme like that ^_^;

Update soon, please!!!
- Telpei
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, what a way to end! I can't wait for more. I want to see Naruto's reaction. And then I want to Sasuke and Naruto fuzzies!!! I NEED them, darn it. It's an addiction. Acceptance is the first step they say. Until the next.
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahhahaha!! That's Naruto for ya!! LOL!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Dynamo
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, i cant wait for more!
person hisoka
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes everyone thinks of marshmellows when they wake up thinking their friend started a fire in their room,id probly pass out thinkin i saw shiny glowing flying monkeys and one had my friends head then probly try to grab them thinking theyd be fuzzy.sasukes reactions probly to raise an eye brow and sigh when he passed back out,hell probly stay out for a while or at least til morning.glad you updated hope you do again soon(new hed wake up:)
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, I can hardly wait to seee what happens.