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for Midnight's Moon

by spoon10488

schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Happy for ya!

Now, can't wait for Naruto to wake up! The angst! The drama!
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more more! I love it! its like being a kid who never wants its to end.
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised Sasuke didn't kill Kabuto. Oh well, I wonder where Sasuke and Naruto are going to go next? Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up on all your chapters! I can't wait to see how Naruto reacts to his kidnapping and the control device that Sasuke will put on him. The vials Sasuke got from that shop were aphrodisiacs, huh? Can't wait for the smut then! :D
person VRon8899
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooh ^^ -loves on story- Sauske screwed if Tsunade catches up with him...well...i don't thinkNaruto is going to be very happy either when he wakes up!! I can't wait till the next chapter ^^
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that happened, do you know why he was so against you getting them? It seems like you were the more mature one, since you decided to not let the furniture get between your relationship with your father.
I can relate to the wanting to be alone instead of being comforted thing, when someone tries to make it better I end up crying harder. It makes me feel guilty, as if I'm being a burden or something.
My day has been okay, I miss my friend whose in Maine right now but she'll be back this Saturday.
person Raechel
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i read chapter 4 and i know how dads are mines the same way and i hate it when hes dissapointed in me but he needs to get tused to change moving your room around and getting stuff you like with your own money is not a crime and i mean no dissrespect but i have a sis like your dad and the problem is that he's to used to getting his way and you shouldnt be afraid to talk even though he'll give you the cold shoulder but you have to let him know that your an adult and your room is your room and if he doesnt approve of somthing than he needs to talk to you first not wait till last minute as i have said befor i mean no disrespect to you or your dad in any way

i really do like your story and hope all is well ^~^ my day is babysitting my 6 siblings ^^
person VRon8899
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*loves* awesome chapter ^_^; I'm glad it all resolved
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ano..i like ur story very much coz it different then the other story. huhu, did sasuke really going to put the bracelet to naruto?
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was very surprised and happy when i saw an update fromyou because i did not expect to see one for awhile. i glad that you talked with your mother and the feel better cheesecake (who wouldn't love that). i don't believe what happened effected your chapterbecause i liked it. but maybe that's another one of my issues coming out (i love jealous possesive sasuke). hopefully next chapter naruto will wke up. i have a question will sasuke and naruto run into any of the other ninjas they know from either sound (kabito), suna (gaara), or konha (any of the rookie nine their teachers, or jiraiya and sai). i hope things stay looking up for you.