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This story has started out well...some grammar and spelling mistakes. If you would like someone to Beta Read for you, I'd be most willing to help...given I'm in the middle of Writers block. I could correct any errors in your chapter, if you would like. My email is kagenoshiseisai@aol.com if you are interested. I hope to see a new chapter soon.

your welcome thank you and its not that hard ya just hafta keep a good schedual thanks for the reveiw on my story it could t ake longer thatn i thought to update it

I'm glad things are working out or at least getting better for you and your family... anyway another terrific chapter and I hope you update again soon. ^__^

Where is Sasuke off to now? And what is going on in Kohona now that Naruto and Sasuke are gone? Plus, glad you're feeling better. Hurry with the next chapter!!!

sasukes still crazy wonder what everyones gonna do when they find naruto gone
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Loved the newest chapter.

Sorry to hear about what happened with your dad. Your brother is an awesome person though. Families are a tricky thing to deal with at best. Great to have, but stressful as all hell. ^^

yay new chapter hehe this story is so good i can't wait to see what happens next and i hope your haveing fun writing it cause i'm haveing fun reading it. ^_^

Ah, I understand what it feels to be like in your shoes sweetie, my dad sounds just like yours. It sucks, I know. And that awkwardness right afterwards...yeah I know that feeling too. My best advice to you, is that you follow your heart. People can say that your dad was wrong -and he was wrong- but in the end, what you do or say is what you will have to live with. You had the right to keep what you bought, but you chose not to, because that's what you thought was best. I'm sure one day your dad will realize it -though he may never say it- that the way that he treated you, was wrong. But I also think that somewhere in all that messed up logic, he'll be proud of you, that you didn't judge him for his mistakes. And in the end, forgiving and understanding him, makes you a better person. And I can say that, because I was NOT the better person at times and regret is a bitch...

Anyway, I guess I should get to reviewing the new chapter here, huh! This was really good. I like the little bit of interaction between Sasuke and Naruto and the flash back with Neji was great too! I take it that Gaara isn't going to be a problem in here since you didn't mention it...
Hehe, I can't wait till Naruto wakes up!!! Is he going to be awake in the next chapter, is he, is he, is he!!!! Sorry too much caffeine...
Anyway I wanna read more, so PLEASE update soon! XD

your mom's right. You're an adult and its your decision. No need to let stupid people bother you. Yes, I say you dad's stupid. He's getting upset over something that didn't involve his money or really affect him in any way. Don't let it bother you. He wants to act like that, fine. then that makes you the superior one for not acting like a moron. Might sound arrogant of me. but that's how I deal with people the act in such a manner. same goes for bullies and the like.

-hugs-...it'll be all right....theres always light at the end of the tunnel hun.