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for Midnight's Moon

by spoon10488

person VRon8899
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whooooo...I like this!! I can't wait to see more...their are some spelling mistakes, but meh...I've never been perfect and nor is my writing, so I give no criticism! Please Update soon!!
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. Please continue!!!
person roely
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes i would to see where this is going.
person Vex
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! New chapter. Very nice.
I can't wait to see this item that will keep Naruto 'his'.
person Zigana
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in reading more. Enjoy your vacation.
person Chria
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It sounds really good. I enjoy Sasuke sneaking round kidnapping Naruto and the cold thinking in his POV. Please continue this!
person blueh
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^^, I'm liking where the story is going... and how Sasuke is planning on making Naruto 'his'. >.< Keep updating.

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schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just know that when naruto wakes up sasuke is going to have a collar on him i can feel it. at least that's wht i'm guessing what saske is going to go and pick up. looks like the mpreg possibilities are still up (yeah). i hope that since he is going to sleep for a couple days that naruto will at least get some ramen out of the deal. thanks and can't wait for the next update.
person TFizzle
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKay, now that you have my attention,
what happens next? Your story has a lot of
promise....UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story has a very good start. i wonder about the jitsu that sasuke did on naruto will it do anything to him besides make him sleep. are you going to include itachi since you did not mention that he was dead burt that sasuke was dragged back to konoha. will the hokage send someone after them or the council. because depending who sends them it will also determine who will go after them. is oochimaru and/or kabuto dead because it does not say and i want to know if they will show up in the future as well. this has the potential to be a mpreg (not that it has to be) but i want to put my vote in jic (just in case). is sakura, ino, or hinata going to be a help or a hinderance to the romance of the boys. will this story focus on the journey before eventually returning to a hopefully different konoha or will they be leaving forever. if you are not decided yet i choose the later. everyone always brings naruto back at the end of the fic but actually i don't think they deserve him. i hope that you will continue this story.