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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was another excellent chapter! Like how you made Naruto insightful ;-) Can't wait to read how Sauke woo's him lol Hopefully the next chapter will be soon!
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hee hee hee, okay, i'm about to be come either your worst nightmare or your best dream... cause i'm a serial reviewer... probably after every chapter. XDD anyways, nice story... and DAMN YOU!!! it was just getting good. XDD well, it's been good the whole time... but... awww :( i want more... please hurry.
I do like what you're doing... Naruto is not a dumb little boy, he's very smart ^^ glad you're showing that.
I do like what you're doing... Naruto is not a dumb little boy, he's very smart ^^ glad you're showing that.
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not having something exciting happen is just a tention builder it makes many people come back when they know the author can surprise them and pique their interest with only one chapter.no disapointment here cant wait til you can update
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor naru, he does wanna love him but he's still in a lot of pain. they'll open up to each other hopefully good chappie.
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...This is now my newest favorite story as of two nights ago! I love the "Uchiha Baby Oven", pretty good. Anyway, awesome story, hope you update soon! =3
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so love this story keep up the good work. ^^
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
glad to see that you are still at it and doing well (that's life). i am cuas to why you changed konaha's decision to just let sasuke and naruto go without no one following them to now they have to be back in two years. is this going to change the outcome of the story to thare leaving the village for good to they may be leaving for now but will return eventually and naruto will still get to be hokage. even though i leave it in your more than capable hands kind of wish that they would leave forever it's only what the villagers deserve and it's not like their friends couldn't come and visit. i can't wait to see what happens next. and if you need any more help with the writer's block let me know i have a weed whacker.
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG sorry, i was like O_O i love it. ^^ though there are still a few spelling errors, i could beta for you for a while if that would help... i earned the nickname 'walking dictionary' in school... well, i still have it. XDD anyways, YAY i want more *sits on edge of seat* give me more before i explode *jumps up and down* PLEAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story!!!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, Naruto just made things worse between him and Sasuke by letting Neji kiss him. He really is a dobe! Hurry with the next chapter!!