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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha!
having neji kiss him was Genius!
having neji kiss him was Genius!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel the happiness. Next chappie please.........
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I thought Naruto was so cute regarding how ditzy he was. It was great. I can't wait till the ncxt chapter.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you for the update. i would never have guessed it was pakkun watching them and the explaination for why sasuke couldn't see them was nice as well. i also like how you potrayed kakhi's feelings about naruto. ususally when people write about their relationship they have kakashi giving preference to sasuke it's nice to see how he cares for naruto because i believe he does even more then sasuke. plus i like how you made it seem as if sasuke was getting permission from naruto's dad for his hand in marriage (i thought that was so cute). i wonder if they will return to village in secret years later to see all their (well naruto's friends) years later with their kids (although to be honest one should do). why did you have kakshi and the gang cover up the fact that sasuke kidnapped naruto and why did they allow sasuke to keep that bracelet on naruto. i can not wait to see the next chapter.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that went well. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love love love!!! =D I've been following this story for awhile...i just don't know if i've reviewed it or not...i'm a horrible person!! ><, but anyways I love it!! And i'm sooooooooo happy to see an update!!!! -dances-
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so good! You wrote all the characters' personalities really well...I loved the father figure Kakashi, Neji kissing Naruto and making Sasuke jealous, and Sakura leveling out a part of the forest was priceless ^_^ Also Sasuke helping Naruto through his mental attack was really tender and sweet. The way you describe things is amazing and you have a real skill of setting up scences and getting across the emotion. Update soon!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAY! I loved this chapter too!
Yeah naruto seemed reaaally out of it in this chapter, but it was awesome anyway!
And the quotes sakura did of sasuke OMG I cound't stop laughing while reading it imagining the others faces as they heard!
I like everything so far, and Im really glad they got to be together without problems with the others. I just hope that later on in the story you get them to visit naruto and sasuke sometimes, because it would be too much for them to never see iruka, kakashi, sakura tsunade and the others ever again, but I think that would be for muuuuuuuuuuuuuch later on.
Anyway thats my only sugestion, I hope you get to update soon!!!!
Sorry this got kinda long today, but I've been really anxious for this chapter to finallly appear!
Yeah naruto seemed reaaally out of it in this chapter, but it was awesome anyway!
And the quotes sakura did of sasuke OMG I cound't stop laughing while reading it imagining the others faces as they heard!
I like everything so far, and Im really glad they got to be together without problems with the others. I just hope that later on in the story you get them to visit naruto and sasuke sometimes, because it would be too much for them to never see iruka, kakashi, sakura tsunade and the others ever again, but I think that would be for muuuuuuuuuuuuuch later on.
Anyway thats my only sugestion, I hope you get to update soon!!!!
Sorry this got kinda long today, but I've been really anxious for this chapter to finallly appear!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!!! i hope you continue with it!!!! i can't wait to read another chapter!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter! I love the fact that Kakashi avenged Naruto. Usually its Sasuke or Iruka, but to me, even though Kakashi doesn't show it, he really does like Naruto as more than just a student. Its hard not love someone like Naruto as family, lol.
As for your email, I didn't get it :( Here is the addy again as well as another one. vinsseraph@hotmail.com or ezzy.valentine@gmail.com . I look forward to the email :-D
As for your email, I didn't get it :( Here is the addy again as well as another one. vinsseraph@hotmail.com or ezzy.valentine@gmail.com . I look forward to the email :-D