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for Midnight's Moon

by spoon10488

person rubyred
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey to answer your qestions on Matt...Matt! AKA Mail Jeeves third in line to be heir to L he was a a wiz with comps and blowing shit up he can dirves at 100 MPH and NOT crash!
his b-day is feb 1 1990 he's a red head with issues about succes that stopped him fom bieng first in line
He's my fangirl love.
once a apon a time..before the DN anime relesaesomeone made him a fan art redhead
and it stuck..
till the anime came out...
and he was shown to have brown hair.
I like him as a redhead so...



person nyge98
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That flashback gave some really good insight into Naruto and what is really going on in the village. I loved the new chapters. Though the cliffhanger broke my heart. LOL. I can't wait till the next chapter.
person hisoka
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
breakdowns,didnt know they could be triggered that easily.sasuke took a long time to try and help, so kakashis there wonder what hes going to do sasukes still weak and narutos on the edge fo a breakdown (no help there).curiosity, hope you can update soon
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can so picture Naruto as a drooler. I can already invision fights about that habit. As for Kakashi, thumbs up. I believe that if he ever saw someone he truly cared for in such a situation he would snap. He lost so many important people to violence that all those feelings of guilt, pain, and anger (at himself and those who hurt his loved ones) that it would completely overwelm him. I can't wait to see how Sasuke explains all that he's done.

(On a side note. Have you ever stopped to wonder what would happen if sleeping beauty was a drooler? Wouldn't she eventually die of dehydration or something like that. This is just a random thought that occured to me one day and doesn't deserve a comment)
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I can't wait for the next chapter! You've done a great job! :D Hope to see it sometime soon, but I'll be keeping an eye out either way. Until the next time!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yah another new chapter so soon i am realy pumped. does kakshi know about the no kissing rules of the uchiha clan since he knew obito. since the konoha ninjas came out of hidding and revealed themselves that eliminates them as the one who was watching sasuke and naruto. and just because i was thinking about it i eliminated kabuto which only leaves me with someone from ats---(badspeller). my first guess would have been itachi but i don't think you will have them meet so soon in the story even though if he was the one watching and saw sasuke kiss naruto that would be really interesting. i thought you illustrated very well the totally shittiness of that stinking village (so sorry just a little bitter right now), although it does leave me curious as to where sasuke thinks he and naruto can go where the konoha ninjas can't find and bother them. are they going to meet the any of the members of team hebi in their travels. possibly to either join or just be mentioned in your story. i can only say i hope your projects turn out well and can't wait to see the next update.
person a kitsunes light
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it! loveit loveit ALL! since the monster drool to the angst part! I dont mind angst, just not so much when it goes to extreems, but I really loved this one, it wasn't thatangst, and it's interesting I never before read about that kind of mental problem naruto has.
mmmm And you really left us in a mistery with the final kakashi thing, cant wait to know what happens!!!
WRITE SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!ONEGAI!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like that Sasuke immediately deduced the problem because he'd suffered the same type of thing. It made me go "awww" cuz they understand each other. (or at least in this they do)
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Spoon, you almost made me late. I started reading this today and I had to read it all at once. I went to my appointment with one minute to spare. Keep updating, I want to read more.
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a good chapter. i got teary eyed for a moment there. hmm. is it just kakashi or more people? i dont know why but im thinking that because of that flash back kakashi is going to lrt tham go. is he?