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Oh my goodness! Poor Naruto. And I loved the avenger Kakashi. This chapter had me all over the place. Laughing because of the drool monster and nearly dying because I forgot to breathe through the hospital conversation and then Sasuke understanding Naruto's 'snapping' episodes... almost immediately.
Oh and when they were all wrapped up together... awww...
And now Kakashi! YAY. I wonder who else is there. Will they demand Naruto back? Will Naruto want to leave? I don't even need to ask if Sasuke will let him... I kinda know that answer to that.
Great update.

This chapter was so touching! Sasuke should have Naruto because he obviously cares and understands him alot. Your story is really good =)

Kakashi? How did he get there without Sasuke sensing him with the Sharigan? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

You know, this whole Uchiha no kissing thing has me intrigued as to how Sasuke felt after he and Naruto shared their "first kiss" back in Ninja school. >:)


Kakashi is going to be so pissed with Sasuke. The next chapter promises to be a good one. Keep up the good work! ^^

That's funny about the ramen.
I hope Kakashi doesn't cause any trouble for Sasuke.
Thanks for the update.

good luck on your projects!! can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! keep up the good work!!!!

OMG CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
SO WHO HAD BEEN WATCHING THEM, THAT SASUKE COULDNT DETECT????
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

LOL! Naruto really REALLY need his ramen to survive. so funny, and good. and I felt so bad for Naruto. poor baby.God, I wanna kick those attackers asses to!! good thing Kakashi came along. update!update!

Aww this chapter was a bit sad with what Naruto remembered in his flashback. It was very well written. I did get a chuckle out of the whole 'I'm not weird! I just don't have a lot of money to spend.' *snickers* I don't know why but I got a kick out that.

Oh you want to know what the y! gallery is. Well to sum up it's basically a site dedicated to yaoi and yaoi only. So yeah it's sort of this big smut fest. It includes written work and art. The stuff posted has to be about yaoi. I actually have my profile address on my AFF profile but you have to be a member to view it I believe.

That's actually why I ended up getting an account. I would read stories on here and then see links for fanart that would be posted on the y! >_< unfortunately when I would go to view them I would get a 'website can not be displayed' message so I made an account. Now I'm hooked. It's a lot of fun and there are a lot of authors who are on AFF who have a y! account as well.

If your interested in checking it out here is the actual website link. http://yaoi.y-gallery.net

Hey sometimes the y! can be a bit confusing but through trial and error I've figured most of it out so if you do join and have any problems or bouts of confusion e-mail me and I'll help you out.

Awwww wow! I really enjoyed reading this, it's so kawaii!!! I hope to read another chapter soon! Hmmm also, I always hated when I'd recieve reviews with no information on what I could do to improve my story, which don't get me wrong...I LOVE recieving reviews, but a little bit of help is nice. I was thinking that -maybe- a bit more detail would help, you already do much better than others on the detail area...but that was all I really could come up with ^.^ I'm a failure lmao!
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