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for Midnight's Moon

by spoon10488

person Nusku
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: poor Naru-chan...please update soon
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was great! Please update soon! Wonder what Kakashi wants...cant wait to find out!
person caidanu
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I've checked out some of your art and it's good. I love the avatar that you've made for your profile as well. Sorry for the fluff review but I couldn't help myself.
person caidanu
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that I missed this chapter update babe, which was fine btw. Yeah sometimes a little angst isn't a bad thing. Life can't be all lollipops and pansies you know (which I am horribly grateful for). I see you have a Deviant account...I do too so I'll have to look you up although I haven't been on mine for a long time. I'm too busy trolling the y! looking at pretty smut XD
person hisoka
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
to go through such lengths for someone you love, thats either true dedication or obsession.hope you can update soon
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading the last few chapters. ^^ Naruto's sure got some conflicting emotions to sort through regarding Konoha. Sure, Sasuke may be determined that the two of them never go back, but he's underestimating Naruto's ability to get what he wants through sheer determination!

Keep up the good work, Spoon! I'm looking forward to reading about what happens next!
person hpn827
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me guess Itachi was watching them.
person mls
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!!!!
person a kitsunes light
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks thanks thanks soooooo much for writing!!!
And I hope you keep what you said and write soon this week, and the chapter was just fine, not to mushy or anything, at least I love it! And Im really intriged about everything: can't wait for the mpreg(Imkindaintoitnow), can't wait to know what eyes were watching them, can't wait if they will meet with the konoha people that's traking them
SO MANY THINGS!!!! I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS FIC!!!
PS: gonna have a look on the artacount you said
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't speak for others but i liked this short little visit into sap land. when you read an angsty story itis always good to throw in a little syrup to even it out. i curious to know who was watching them, but i have not counted out kabuto as he was in that village and could have followed them. although i do wonder why sasuke didn't notice he was being followd. i can't wait to see who they have in the search teamihoping that sai will be one of them. lately i have itching to see a kabuto and sai pairing and this looks like it is ripe with the possibilities to do so. thanks for the update and can't wait to see the next one.