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Aw that was so sweet. Please update soon!

yay new chapter

waaaaaaaah! ok, i'm done being childish about the short chappie, especially since you said you'd make up for it. LOL! what i wanna know is how the duo plan to ditch their pursuers. i know you won't disappoint. i like the tender moment about how sasu understands naru's pain and wants to help ease it, not just to use him as a baby oven (still chuckling about that!).

ja!

Who was the mysterious person watching them? And wil they get caught by the Konoha nins chasing them? Hurry with the next chapter!!

Aww. theyre so cute together.
i like the way your story is going and i also like your writing style. please keep writing!

I understand the updating thing but if you ever want to bounce a few ideas off of me go right ahead. I'd still love to bounce a few off of you so here's my e-mail Heyashleyjude@AOL.com. E-mail me so we can correspond.

Interesting chapter. I can only wonder who the eyes belong to. I look forward to the next chapter.

Hi spoon!

I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying this fic and I can't wait to see where you go with this. I did notice a few mistakes, but hell, who doesn't have them every once in a while.

That brings me to my next little thing. I wanted to know if it would be okay if I went through and corrected the spelling errors for you and maybe add a bit of punctuation that might make it a little easier to read. I was looking to see if you had an email posted so I could contact you that way, but i didn't see one so feel free to delete this review afterwards. If its okay, please contact me at my email address (vinsseraph@hotmail.com)

I'm not perfect, but I have a tendency to be a bit anal when it comes to making sure at least the spelling is okay (especially on another person's story) and I'll send you each chapter so you can review them and see if you like the flow a bit more.

Thanks for posting this fic :)

Your pants are GONE!! Dun dun dun!!! That's when Naruto realized he was in deep deep trouble.

Hey I love this, really though Naruto should be happy to get away from the assholes in Konoha. Of course not everyone there is bad, but the majority of people are. I hope Konoha doesn't find them anytime soon though if they do, Naruto should just consider this a vacation. And the pervert in me can't wait for whatever kinky, dominanting sex Sasuke comes up with for Naruto.

oh wow ho wow oh wow
this is great **puppy eyes***
oh please more
but finish your school project first:P