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loved it can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

Okay... first, Naruto as a 'shrink' was so funny... I can just see his face, all screnched and serious looking. ;)
Next, Sasuke just coming right out and throwing everything down on the table was unexpected, but brilliant. I'm glad he did. At least Naruto knows where he stands.
And finally, this line almost made me die laughing... really. I was choking and everything.
"He only meant that there was no one else to who could fulfill the baby-making roll and not make the raven want to kill himself. I guess there’s a little pride in that. Not much but a little."

Oh dear god... priceless. There were tears!!!

First, thank you so much for reviewing my own story. I really appreciate it. I too, enjoy warm fuzzies especially during the cold months of winter. (Looks outside, glares at snow. Blinks, temporarily blinded) Note to self. Don’t glare at snow, it glares back.

I love the new update. No over reacting from anyone. That can be hard. I love your wording, phrases like ‘baby oven’ make me giggle. And if Sasuke ever whispered ‘I’m going to fuck you into every possible surface until you become fat with my child’ in my ear, I too would get turned on. Although the sentence would be redundant since I’m already fat.

As for grammar and spelling, I do the same thing. I just thought I'd give you a heads up. Hey, if you need someone to look your chapters over I’ll do it. Especially if you let be bump some ideas off of you.

Anyway, as a present for reviewing twice for me and writing such a good story yourself, I’ll answer your question. Sasuke must apologize to everyone who got hurt trying to retrieve him, their families if they have any, and the Hokage. That is going to be fun to write.

Thank you for updating. I really like the story's concept and the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto as you have described it. I can't wait to see if they reach their destination successfully.

aaaahhhhh, it's so nice to come here, read one of your stories, and KNOW and i won't be disappointed. ;-) that conversation between naru and sasu was hilarious, especially the i'm going to screw you into the ground and leave you barefoot 'n pregnant line. LOL! i can actually see sasu saying that. what a hoot!

I'm loving this story-
Sasuke is sweet in his own way-
I can't wait to read the rest-

That went...well, I guess. I wonder where Sasuke and Naurto's new home will be? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

sometimes you have to get in someone's face to make them see the light (or in this case future sasuxnaru goodness). the scene where you had sasuke play head games with naruto was really good, especially the lines they were trading back and forth.i liked this chapter and i thought it was intersting that you had sasuke tell naruto about the pregnancy plans. was there a particular reason that you did it now instead of later in the story. i can't wait to se the next chapter.

"When the blond got angry and flustered he looked oh so fuckable." "Just a little more and he'll snap." Hahaha...god this has to be my favorite chapter yet. It was so much fun to read the interaction between the boys.

"Ahhh" "You...you're hard!" Master of the obvious Naruto. The I'm 'gay' talk between them. Oh and I loved the third leg comment.

Fuck I laughed so damn hard reading this. Naruto talking to Sasuke about getting 'help' if Orochimaru had molested him and mental institutions.

"I'm going to fuck youinto every possible surface until you become fat with my child." Not pregnant with my child but 'fat'...bad Sasuke, Naruto will never want to become 'fat' with your child now.

You put eveything in this chapter except the kitchen sink. I NEED MORE!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter love. Great work.

cai

That was excellent. I laughed so hard when Naruto was talking to him like a child and Sasuke was getting so mad. It was priceless. I hope you write again soon.