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for Riding the Elevator

by Adi

person Demitria Miriam
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAH! That was... scary. And sad. And hot and... I hate you so much right now. -_- LOL. Great job! I seriously didn't believe you that Naruto could be seme while Sasuke still held his arrogance. GREAT job! ^^


-DM
person CSMars
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so good!! i love your stories! you should publish this one on ff.net as well!
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke and all his feelings! I loved this one-shot so much. You bring out dimensions to your characters, that are usually glossed over or missing in the average Naruto fic. You are an amazing writer babe.
Needless to say...the smex was hot!
I demand more porn!! And I ain't ashamed to say it!! (Says that from her hidey-hole)
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just wonderful! I really enjoyed it. *prods at your other stuff*
person Mikra
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this.
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story. The relationship between the two was protrayed incredibly. I like how you also protrayed the characters. There were real human qualities to both that made them seem as if they could be anyone you know. Sasuke showed weakness and irrationality within his stoic demeanor while Naruto showed maturity underneath his "idiotic" personality. Well done!
person BlackHawkDown
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. It was so wonderfully angsty.
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Loved it!!!!!
Sasuke's emotions are so troublesome XP

This was a great one shot!!!!!
person mr. L
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy crap...that was soooo dramatic and cool....thanx
person Trollmia
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I ever could have been a little fly on that elevator-wall.... *yummie* And my dreams would have been complete...

You have made this little AU-thingy into a perfectly believable story. The bickering tehy have is just like the bickering they have in the first parts of the manga/anime...

Really - a very good job.

Come up with more like this one in the future and I will be your humble reader/reviewer...