rate_review Reviews

i love this story, it's awesome!

Wow. That was bloody fantastic! Seriously. I thought it was so believable, naruto and sasuke were right on! I love you forever for this lol. Yup I thought that the added scene added a lot more depth to this short piece.... making it less 'Sasuke's being an ass again' and more like 'Damn that dude has serious issues'^^. Would you ever consider doing and multi-chapter fic based on that dysfunctional relationship?

It was so good! Yay! *sighs and blushes* So I can't wait to see what else you'll write next.

thats sad,he could have told him hed always be there at least in his heart.
bringing the realites of life into a story nice work

ooh, liked this as well as your first fic!
^_^

The ending made me tear up. I didn't even notice till I checked to see if there was more, but then my vision blurred. I hadn't realized that Sasuke's vulnerability throughout the fic had touched me so much. I have read your other works, and quite enjoyed them, but I don't normally review stories I read. I don't write fanfiction myself, so I don’t really feel like I have the right to criticize and/or praise a medium that I have no experience in. However, in rare cases, such as this one, I feel it is my duty as an avid reader to offer feedback. I'm not going to say Sasuke's totally IC, because he's not, but personally I love the way you have taken his weaknesses and inner struggles and emphasized it for your Sasuke. His desperation is just heart wrenching, and Naruto's drive to chip through Sasuke's defenses is also beautiful and sweet.

I know you said you would never write angst again, but I don't really consider this all that angsty because parts were heart wrenching (as I said above) but not depressing. I really, really like it and I really hope you consider writing more pieces of this style, or at leased more in this series. ^_^
Raining Firefly

so cute

While I'm logged in, can I just reiterate how much I freaking love this and Riding the Tube... and I will nag you until they end up doing the deed and Sasuke gets over his angsty self or... at the least Naruto says 'fuck it, I'm done'. Must. Have. Resolution.

Lovely dear, absolutely love it. You write the best angst in town.

Wow. It's a very nice story. I've read the other story too, that was hot and sexy. It was sexy too, but the ending and the mood all along was very catching and lovely. I like your writing style. ^^

Life is angst. This was beautifully done!