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by inediblefrogs

schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories... I can't believe how often I forget to review... I blame it on the fact your stories are so hot they fry my brain cells!
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I usually don't do fics with open relationships, but I love how you keep it romantic and meaningful even when your couples become involved with others. And poor Iruka, it just makes me sad. But I get it, and I love it.
person Hestia
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so sad for Iruka! But so good for everyone else!!!
person tovah
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was hot!!! I read your story "Private Conversations" and it was so good I decided to read everything else you had in your profile. I can tell you I was not disappointed you write the best yummy yaoi smexyness, I have ever read. I think you got some greatest lemons ever. I will definitely be watching for anything else you post in the future.

person Ebaka
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i guess you did give that notebook with angsty drafts a chance, right?))) really hope, you have some more, cause this was...was...curse my stupid lack of english vocabulary (awesome, great, wonderful - damn, those are all just way too trite to express how i feel about this new fic of yours!)...hmmm in russian i would just say "ñëóøàé, çäîðîâî" (it's untranslatable, btw ^^, but my russian accuantances know what i high praise it is)))...you really are reducing my stoic and pride self to a drooling Shikyaku-fangirl XD)))

now i should really calm myself and try to move to the more constructive part - you always do the characters so expressive, so emmm multifacated (can this word actually be used in this context...not sure)))...i love how you write izumo and kotetsu (these guys get waaay too little attention in the naruto fanfiction world, but your writing totally compensates the lack of it)))...the cold type of writing manner in the kakashixiruka part and the emotional one in kotetsuxizumo completed with the intense moresome...wonderful...
person Julissis
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! God, Kotetsu is such a sexy, dirty talking bastard!
You and my sensei are now my favorite "bringing unresolved sexual tension to new heights" writers. XD
Or is it just the fact, that you two write about those sexy jounin? (and chuunin, sorry iruka. ^^)
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, another one shot that I loved. You know, I still can't get over how emotional you write them all, as if they couldn't make it without one another.

I would never be able to write threesomes, foursomes and moresomes likeyou do. This is so great. I always love your work, and I daresay I'm a fangirl. XD
person llyoung
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always I really really love your stories. But I do feel a little sorry for
Iruka. Loved the foursome. Thanks for writing.
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes. More Shikyaku. ^_^

I really loved the comfort scene between Izumo and Kotetsu - it was very sweet, very touching, and it was nice to see that side of Kotetsu. You're really getting me emotionally connected to those two Messenger Boys. XD

And the Genma and Raidou section: There was this air of tension, from beginning to end, that made it almost frightening to read. Maybe it was - if Raidou, who IS strong, who IS in control, loses his control, what will happen then? But it all worked out in the end. ^_^ Izumo is so sweet, so freakin fuckable, who could resist, really? I loved how rough Raidou got after he sucked him off. I have a feeling Raidou's not going to be able to hold back much longer - but that's okay, now, right? Right.

Loved it.
person cynaga
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAWT~! THX!