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for Demon of Redemption

by TRG

schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one is so good! I was so glad that you updated - thank you!
And I can't wait until they finally meet each other.
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii! Susumu is sooo cute!!! ^^
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They were so close to meeting!!! I can't wait till they do! :)
person akinohanun
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy crap this is really good i can't wait to read more!!!!!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Poor Naruto fighting to clean his tainted soul, when he is not truely to blame. I hope Sasuke get to met him. Please update soon.
person lonelylulaby
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would have dropped the kid right there and been on my way. Yup that would have been the last thing he would have seen of me, my back. Can't wait till the next chappie were we see what shall happen with the Sasuke situation.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious as to who the mother of Susumu is. Sad that Sasuke didn't lose his virginity to Naruto. unless...nah, nevermind. MissMayumi is not thinking anything!
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again! You did it again! Damn you!


Ending a chapter with me wanting more. Criminal, I tells ya. Criminal!




Seriously though, keep up the good work! ^^ I love it!
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one! It has such a Kenshin-ish quality to it, and I'm quite enjoying your writing style. Aw, Sasuke's kid is cute. Can't wait for more!
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!! Poor Naruto, asking who Susumu's father is.... LOL!
Can't wait to see the next chapter.