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love the fact that you put ino and shika(LOVE HIM!!!) together inastead of shika and temari(YUCK) but to tell you the truth i can't see little innocent hinata doing the forbidden dance( imagine what her dad would say... probably forget gentle fist and try beating kiba with a stick XD)... but for the shikaino thing i always wanted shikamaru to snap and yell at her or be rude and then see ino go crazy over him(like sasuke being rude and her drooling over him because he was such a badass) i think that would be funny and very passionate!! but yea that's just what i think.. also are you going to put sakura in this story could you put her with sasuke~drools at thought of dominant sasuke~ love your story and can't wait till next chappie!

Yay! KibaHina! Can I say I absolutely love you for that? Good stuff… I can't wait!
Also, I was wondering--- does it have to be ShikaIno? You could do NaruIno or SasuIno, because those are SO much sexier… But, alas, you are the author! UPDATE SOON!

Have them walk in on them if you want.

You are so evil with the cliffhangers. :-) Neji and Tenten were realy hot, but I can't wait for Kiba and Hinata.

Very nice lemon between Neji and Tenten in chapter three. You did such a good job of describing just how much they longed for one another and how the sex between them consummated their relationship fully. Definitely one of the best Neji/Tenten fics I've read. And this upcoming Hinata/Kiba fics sounds interesting as well. I hope it meets my expectations. ;)

Yes, yu're getting to Hinata and Kiba arc. I can't wait for the update, I hope it be soon.

Absolutely fantastic fanfic throughout, though for some reason I find myself liking chapter three the most :-) Anyway, very well written and interesting, and I am really looking forward to the latter chaps. Update soon!

Man, you're right. It's TOO Hot. Ten-Ten is way too hot. I hope you update soon, I'm really looking forward to it.

That totally fits them.

Excellent fic thus far. The lemon in the third chapter was very hot indeed and it certainly made up for all the sexual frustration on Neji's part, I'm certain. I also particularly love his comment of "you inspire me." Wonderful Neji/Tenten goodness. I can't wait to see any potential Kiba/Hinata excerpts you would do for this story. (I rather enjoy the pairing, as rare as it can be.) Keep this up. You're doing a smashing job.