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for Your Wish Is My Command

by nayru

person nawatia
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy for Iruka! He got alittle somethin'. Really does need more tho. I am enjoying the sweetness and romantic gestures Iruka is tossing to Kakashi. However hard Kakashi is trying to avoid hurting Iruka, it may happen anyway if Iruka finds out that Kakashi is making his decisions for him by omitting his concerns, and not talking to him.

Love what you are doing with the story! Keep going!
person cynaga
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did great. The 5th chapter is delightful~!
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! *sigh* Love your stories!

I am so happy when you update. Poor Kakashi...but I am glad that he doesn't take advantage and can't wait to see what happens when the jutsu finally ends and he realizes that Iruka really is his!
person Julissis
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, a new chapter. And it's deliciously looong. ^^

You know.. i cracked up when Naruto suggested a less-perverted boyfriend for iruka.. like.. genma. lol
There isn't any konoha-nin who's more of a pervert then gen. XD Sexy pervert that is.

No, don't let him give in. It's so much more fun the way you wrote it. ^^ I really like your story and was so happy to see this new chapter.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Yeah Yeah New chapter. I love this story. Thanks so much for sharing.
person sethian
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely fic! Iruka is so impossibly cute!! I like where you are leading the story! :oD
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tsunade's wrath is scary, but Iruka-kun's wrath is even more scary! XD

Anywho I love this story so far.. Can't wait till there is more.

^^ Iruka is sooo cute...
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nuuuuuuuu!!! want more......XD.....i LOVE it......soooo much......and i very much like you're Tsunade....^__^
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fear the teacher voice.

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My god they're just so cute together I can't stand it! I can't wait to see who else is on the Iruka protection committee, Ibiki and Anko maybe?
person nawatia
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!! So nice and long, and full of goodness...mmmmm. Ahem...Wonderful chapter, loved the plot and character development. Glad Iruka has started to notice Kakashi's avoidance of the "deed". Was wondering how Iruka would respond - would he ask Kakashi outright why he puts the brakes on anything past kissing and "rubbing", and why Kakashi doesn't actually get off on the deal...or would Iruka think that Kakashi is only allowing his advances because Kakashi is humoring him, and does not really return his feelings - then go to Tsunade to break off the arrangement - because Iruka doesn't wish to burden Kakashi with emotions that he can't return....Hmmmm

As you can see, your story has planted the seeds of speculation...

Loved the chapter length - and eagerly await the next...Poor guys, the coitus interuptus must end!