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for Your Wish Is My Command

by nayru

schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I want to scream at the end of each chapter. i don't want them to end but they do. and I worry that there will not be more. I love this story and I thank you for making big chapters. This is so great. Thanks for sharing.
person ALD
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, Iloved the scene w/the belly rub. Iruka is just too cute when he wants something and starts pouting, really brings the character to life. I have to feel for Kakashi though. I seriously thought Genma had made Iruka give head or something and almost laughed when it was only a neck rub. Kakashi's worries and insequirities are starting to take there toll. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Enbi-sama
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T - T

Poor Iruka-sensei... he's not getting any D8<
But i love it, i've already read your previous chapters... i'm just too damn lazy to comment on 'em >>
Forgive me D:

But aside from me being a lazy-turd, i find your story amazing, i mean, it has such an origional plot and the cliff hangers yoy manage to leave inthe end make people want to come back and find out if Kakashi and Iruka have done the dirty deed yet or not.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

You keep up the good work!!!

Loves and squeals from Enbi-sama!
person cynaga
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This rocks~! What a great idea for a story. Thanks. :D
person luxeflex
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic to death ;_; it's making me cry (from happiness ofcourse)
^^
person bchan
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Kakashi! How could he be so blind and hurt Iruka? He didn't even think that push Iruka away would make he feel insicure. I hope someone comes along and smacks him!
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo sweet. Thank you.
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So good... so good!! I love your stories. Thanks for the update.
person lo
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Great job you are really making this fun to read.